The Nasty Neighbor Girl (Day 1)

(MARY)

Mary’s eyes slowly drifted open as she heard the car doors slam in the drive way. Her parents where going on some private cruise to the Bahamas and she was stuck home all alone. Being the sixteen year old girl that she was, naturally the first thing that came to mind was parties, parties, and more parties. Unfortunately, this was not the case for her, since she didn’t know anyone in this town. Their family had only lived here for a few weeks after moving clear across the country. She sulked her way out of bed, stretched out her nude body, and made her way to the bathroom.

Mary moaned as she walked to the bathroom. Her new toy filled her ass to the limits and she loved the way it moved when she walked. Mary was a girl addicted to playing with her ass, but that was only the tip of the iceberg. Once she reached the bathroom, she took a look in the mirror and stroked he long, curly brown hair. She looked at the toilet and almost considered “using” it, but then decided against it. She exited the bathroom and walked into the kitchen. Opening the cupboard, she pulled out a large pitcher that would normally be used by her mom to make tea. Well, tea wasn’t what she was going to use it for. Mary sat the jug on the floor right in the middle of the kitchen and squatted over it. Her teen pussy went off like a garden hose on full blast as her piss filled the pitcher. She moaned loudly as she felt pressure at her rear, but her butt plug wouldn’t budge. Her bladder was some kind of bottomless pit; she pissed, and pissed, and pissed and to her amazement managed to fill it to the top. The smell of urine filled her nostrils sending the high school girl into a high. The jug began overflowing and her yellow liquid flowed down to the floor and spread out to form a puddle on the kitchen floor. With a few more pushes, her bladder finally emptied the last of its contents.

Mary plopped her butt down on the wet floor and lifted the jug. Without hesitating she brought her lips to the edge of it and sucked in a mouthful of her pungent piss. She sloshed it around her cheeks, savoring the taste and swallowed it down with one big gulp. She exhaled, took a deep breath, and started chugging as though she hadn’t had anything to drink for days.


(JAMES)


Jim was outside mowing his lawn for his parents. He was well built for a fourteen year old teen, and contrary to most boys his age, actually enjoyed doing house work for his parents. He hadn’t gotten the chance to meet his new neighbors yet, but he heard from his parents that they had a beautiful daughter who was a little older than him.

Jimmy whipped the sweat from his forehead as he mowed over the last few feet of grass and shut the push mower off. As a kid with some severe OCD, James had to go back and double check the lawn to make sure it was in tip top condition. Upon walking around the side of the yard, he noticed something out of the corner of his eye. He couldn’t really see very well, but through the patio windows of his neighbor’s house, he could see what looked like someone squatting over something. Curiosity getting the best of him, he walked around the side of the house and slyly peeked around the corner into the window. The person was a teenage girl, she was naked, and it was quite clear that she was urinating into some sort of container. Jim’s mouth flew open in shock as he scoped the girl’s body. She was facing away from him giving him full view of the object that was sticking out of her butt. What happened next caused James’ mouth to fly open with shock. The girl picked the thing up and started drinking from it.

“Ugh…” Jim let out in disgust.

However disgusting it was to Jim, he couldn’t deny the fact that there was something quite kinky about this. His dick grew into an iron rod. After few seconds on drinking, the girl stood up, causing Jim to panic and retreat back to his home.

(MARY)

Mary knew that she was being watched. She stood at the counter and watched as the kid ran back to his house next door. She smiled; she was going to get him back for spying on her. She dumped the remaining piss into the sink and ran to her bedroom. Once she was dressed, she decided to go next door and play a little game with the guy. Digital camera in hand, she snuck out the back door and around her house to the neighbors. Little did the young man know that she had been spying on him since day one. The kid’s window was easy to see through, and she watched him masturbate several times a day. Putting her plan into motion, she crept up to the side of his window and peeked in. Sure enough, her assumptions where correct. The teenage pervert was on his bed pumping his dick as though his life depended on it.

“I’ve got you now…” Mary Smirked

*Click*
*Click*
*Click*

Mary even managed to take a video of the last few pumps and his climax. She had to admit, the kid could cum a lot. Mary shut off her camera, walked around to the front door, and rang the doorbell. It took a minute before someone came to the door. It was the kid.

“Can I help you?” The kid responded.

“Yeah, I was wondering if you could do a favor for me. My parents are gone for the week, and I can’t for the life of me find our garden hose. It’s sort of an emergency” Mary responded.

“Emergency?” The kid grew puzzled.

“Can I use yours?” Mary smiled at the kid.

“Uhhh, I guess so…” He responded

Mary was let in by the boy.

“My name is Mary.” She held her hand out.

“James, but most people call me Jim.” James responded.

“Nice to meet you James. Are you parents here? I haven’t had the chance to meet any of the people in the neighborhood yet.” She played innocent.

“Uhh, no… they are one their way to Hawaii.” Jim grew nervous.

“Oh, so you’re stuck home all alone too…” Mary’s smile grew larger. Everything was going to work out great.

The two of them eventually made their way to the back yard. Jim pointed to the coiled up garden hose on the side of the house.

“Oh thank you, I’ve been needing to get around to this for the last few days!” Mary grew estatic.

Mary hugged the fourteen year old boy and made her way to the hose and began uncoiling it.

“So what exactly are you going to use it f….” Jim’s eyes flew open.

Mary unzipped her jeans and swiftly pulled them down in front of the boy.

(JAMES)

James could only stand there in shock as Mary dropped her pants and panties down to her feat. It all happened so fast. Mary grabbed onto the thing in her ass and tugged it out. What happened next was unforgettable. The plug popped out with a pop, and was covered in her brown shit.

“Ughh, finally…” Mary groaned.

Her stretched out ass hole let out a ferocious fart and began to expand. It didn’t take long for the head of a huge shit log to pop out. Mary hunched over and spread her butt cheeks nice and wide, giving Jim a front row seat to the nasty spectacle. The large brown turd just kept on flowing out of the girl’s ass until it broke under its own weight. There was a disgusting, wet plop as the foot long shit hit the cement.

(MARY)

“Oh shit…mmmmmm” The shitting girl moaned.

Mary let out another fart, as a several smaller logs exploded like a waterfall of shit from her ass. Jim just stood there and watched as his new neighbor dropped more logs onto his patio. It was a never ending stream of shit. The girl must have had the bowls of a horse, because it took more than a minute before the last log fell from her ass to the ground. This was followed by a long wet fart, and a loud moan.

“Jim, be a dear and turn the hose on for me.” Mary looked over her shoulder at the shocked boy.

Like a robot programmed to serve, he walked over to the faucet and turned the water on. Mary swiftly took hold of the other end and squatted down. She brought it around to her shit hole, and swiftly forced it in.

“Ohhhhhhhhhh, fuck that feels good!” She moaned like a horny animal.

Mary’s bowels filled with cold fluid causing her belly to expand outward. After a few seconds, she pulled the hose out, stood up, and spread her butt apart with her free hand. Her hole exploded with brown water and it flew several feet into the yard. Once she was empty, she filled herself back up again. She must have shot fifteen gallons of water from her ass before there was nothing but fresh clear water coming out.

“Mmmm, it feels so good to clean yourself out.” She smirked at Jim as she dropped the hose.

“Hey do me a favor and tell me if there is any more shit stuck down here.” Mary waddled over to Jim, bent over, and spread her ass wide.

“N.n.nn.no…” Jim stuttered.

“Hmm, let me check…” Marybrought her finger to her anus and shoved it all the way in. After a few pumps, she brought it to her mouth and sucked it in.

“Mmmmm, tastes nice and clean.” She moaned.

Mary stood up and pulled her pants up. After that, she grabbed the shocked boy in her arms, and placed her lips on his. After a little work, she had her tongue lapping over his. A few seconds of wet mouth to mouth later, she let go of him.

“Tell anyone, and I will put the pictures I have of you masturbating all over the internet. Not to mention the video.” Mary whispered in his ear.

“See you tomorrow, Jim…” She said with a smile and walked back over to her house.

Jim could only stand there in shock as he came to the realization of what happened. He looked down to the ground and couldn’t believe the mess that she left behind. Then he realized what she said.

“Oh, fuck…” He said.


[End of Day One]


If there is a positive response, I will add more to the story.

OP Here

I might add a loli to the story? y/n?

n!

Wow, I'd love a loli! I vote yes! : )

loli does sound good! maybe one that likes eating scat like mary's friend

>>104

I'd have to say no, not that I don't like loli, it just doesn't fit in with this story.

yesyes yes

>>104

Loli would be HOT!

Having mary introduce a young girl into going against the norm, and showing her innocent body as it functions... (aka "visualizing about a Loli peeing and shitting not in a toilet")

>>108

It could... what if it was a relative... related or removed in some number (once.... twice... THREE TIMES A LADY!!!)

>>107

Oh I'd definitely like that!

>>108

What do you mean it wouldn't "fit" in? Do you mean if it's some random stranger? If so, I'd agree with Waru.

>>112

I have nothing against loli, but the story is great as it is and too many fetishes will ruin the pot.

If a separate loli fic was written, I would love to see it, but I think it would be overcrowding this great story and distract from the focus.

OP Here

I'm probably not going to do it. I had it planned that there was going to be an eleven year old girl who just moved in across the street with her grandparents. Her father was a single parent who is in the military and currently overseas. (she's a military brat). The girl was going to be very strong spirited and very sporty. She was even going to know martial arts. Since the girl was new in town, Mary was going to take the initiative to become her first friend.

She was going to kick some boy's asses too.

>>114

Fair enough. : )

>>113
>>114

Hey, yeah... like some sort of "same universe, different story", kind of thing.

If you want to do it, make it a separate story from this one, and put ("The Nasty Neighbor Girl" universe) next to the title, or something similar so none of us miss it...

For now, continue with this one.

Guys.

It's his story.

>>117

Yeah, you're right...

... which was why I was merely giving him suggestions, not demands.

MOAR

how about adding a hormone induced lactation fetish

>>120

DOES NOT MESH WITH STORY!!!

Also, let the OP work on it themselves!

lol, this is crap

>>123

... your mother.

bump

Nasty Neighbor Girl (Day 56, Part 1)

I’m really sorry about the long wait everyone. I’ve been trying to continue the story and finally came up with a decent chapter. There is a lot of plot here, I recommend reading it to make the following scenes that much better. Also, sorry about any spelling and/or grammatical mistakes that you find. I try to proofread, but I always miss stuff. :(



“Hello everyone, I am Ester!”

Mary nearly came from the sound of her voice. “My god! Where the hell did she come from!?” Mary thought to herself. She had the accent of a goddess.

The teacher spoke up. It was the first time Mary had ever taken any interest in what she had to say. “Ester here is from Norway, she is apart of the foreign exchange program. Please help her out the best you can. Help her get accustomed with our school and community.”

A smile crept across Mary’s face. Somewhere, Jim and J.D. were face-palming.

Lunch time came around, and Mary sat down at her usual lunch table with her tray of food. It wasn’t long before Jim and his friends came along and sat down with her.

“Jim, have you seen the new girl?” Mary asked.

Jim looked at her and sighed to himself knowing full well where this conversation was heading. “Ester?” He responded.

“Yeah…” Mary cut herself short of saying anything else. Typically, Mary would pry into the depths of depravity when it came to discussing other girls. This time however, she and Jim weren’t alone to do so. Just then, Mary caught sight of the girl out of the corner of her eye. “There she is!”

Ester was up at the front of the lunch line talking with the lady. Something didn’t seem right about the conversation.

“Dude, she is getting denied!” Mary said in a really pissed off voice. “I’ll be right back… Mary leapt up from her chair and walked over to the lunch line. As she drew closer, she could here the conversation between the lunch lady and the foreign girl.

“I’m really sorry, but the school recently enacted a new policy saying that we can’t give credit…” The old woman reasoned.

Ester looked to be on the verge tears. It was her first day at school in a new country and here she was holding up the lunch line because she had no money with her. It was humiliating.

“Here…” Mary said. Ester turned around and looked at her and then saw the twenty dollar bill in her hand. “You can pay me back later.” Mary whispered with a small wink of her eye. Ester let out a sigh of relief. “Thank you so much…” The sound of Ester’s voice was as much of a compliment as Mary would ever need.

Mary sat back down at her table with a warm, fuzzy feeling in her tummy. Jim glared at her, but he knew that she did a very nice thing for the girl. Mary looked over at Ester as she sat down alone at a differnt lunch table. *Sigh…*

The school day came and went slowly. After the final bell rang, Mary grabbed her bag and speed walked to her locker.

“Hey Mary!” A voice down the hall shouted at her. Mary turned and caught sight of J.D. zigzagging through waves of students.

“Hey, what’s up?” Mary smiled at the girl.

“Nothin’ much… I was just trying to get a group of people together for a little ping pong playing at the Recreation Center. Care to join?” J.D.’s request was very tempting even if Mary sucked complete ass at the game.

“Sure! What time?” Mary asked.

“How about in thirty minutes?” J.D. beamed and quickly made way down the hall to her next target.

Mary was going to need to hurry if she was going to make it in time. It was going to be one hell of a power-shit when she got home. Once Mary organized her locker to where all he belongings fit, she slammed the door and made haste to her car. Upon exiting the school, she stopped ten paces outside and turned around. Ester was sitting on a bench slouched over. Mary cringed to herself. She felt terrible for the girl and could tell that her day had been a nightmare. “Hey… you okay?” Mary asked as she hunched over and sat down next to the Norwegian beauty.

Ester glanced over at the woman talking to her and was relieve that it wasn’t some cunt trying to harass her. “Thank you so much for the lunch money. It was about the only nice thing anyone did for me today…”

Mary felt the butterflies in her stomach again. God damn her voice was beautiful. “Not a problem. I know going to a different school is hard. This is actually my first week of class here as well. My name is Mary.”

Ester had a warm smile on her face. She looked so relieved to have someone to talk too.

“So why are you sitting here? Shouldn’t you be heading home?” Mary asked.

“Well… I was supposed to be picked up by my Aunt, but something came up. To tell the truth, I’d rather not talk about it…” Ester responded and returned to her sulking position.

“I can give you a ride if you want.” Mary suggested.

Ester smiled, and it was obvious she was thinking about accepting the offer. “Let me text her…” She whipped out her cell phone and quickly typed out a text message to her aunt.

“Good to go?” Mary asked.

“Yeah…” Ester responded.

The two girls piled into Mary’s car and made their way out of the parking lot.

“So where do you live?” Mary asked.

Ester pulled out a piece of paper from her pocket and read the address. “It’s about ten minutes east of town.” She remarked.

Mary quickly came to the realization that taking Ester home would cause her to be late to J.D.’s little ping pong match.

Several minutes of silence passed before Mary couldn’t take it anymore. “So… Hate the place?” Mary glanced over for a second.

“It isn’t so bad, but it wasn’t what I expected…” Ester said in response.

Mary sorted her thoughts trying to continue the conversation. “You know, you can sit with Jim and I at lunch if you want. It’s always nice to see a pretty face around.” Mary smiled over.

Ester smiled, but remained silent.

“Any hobbies?” Mary felt like this was becoming an interview.

“Nothing really interesting.” Ester responded.

Mary grinned. “Oh come on, there has to be something you enjoy doing…”

Ester loosened up a bit. “My cousin plays some weird game sometimes and I join her occasionally. It’s some sort of weird game with a plastic guitar and drums.”

“Rock Band? I fucking love that game! We should totally play it some time!” Mary became highly enthused. But Ester was sort of shocked by the lewd language. “Oops… sorry about the F word. I tend to swear like a sailor…”

“It’s fine… Just turn left here and my house is another mile down the road…” Ester pointed out.

Mary pulled up to the house. It was absolutely huge. She was stunned.

“You live here! Your aunt must be loaded!” Mary exaggerated.

“She is pretty well off. After my uncle died, she inherited all of this from him.” Ester explained. “It can get pretty lonely out here though. Amanda is usually in town with her friends and she doesn’t really let me tag along. My aunt is always out with some man.” The girl winced a little as she revealed the reason her aunt didn’t pick her up.

“Wow, your aunt would make you wait for hours after school just for some guy. What a…” Mary stopped short of using the word and switched to a different subject. “So you’re usually home alone, damn you must be bored out of your mind…”

Ester frowned a little. “I’d rather not talk about it.”

Mary felt like a pile of crap. She was really starting to think how annoying it can be prodding into someone life. She did it to Jim, but he was living a wonderful life with caring parents. Ester, on the other hand, was living the life of a lonely princess with a less-than-perfect family. If there was one thing Mary was good at, it was reading people like a book. She could tell Ester had some secrets, and she was eager to find out what they were.

Mary flipped open her cell phone to check the time. It was already 4:00 and she was late for ping pong.

“I’m sorry for keeping you… you can go now.” Ester said as she opened the car door.

“No, wait, it’s fine. It’s not a big deal. To be honest, I’d really like to stick around for a little bit and see the place if that’s okay with you?” Mary asked.

Ester looked at her for a second. “I’m not sure when my aunt will be home. But as long as she isn’t here, that should be fine.”

Ester led Mary from room to room in the oversized house.

“Just you three live here?” Mary asked.

“Yeah, but it can fill up pretty quick when my Aunt throws her parties. It can be so annoying.” Ester clenched her hand; an obvious sign that Mary better not delve into that topic.

Before long, the two girls were standing in Ester’s bedroom. It contained a large bed with a canopy and several large dressers. The room had a dark brown and greenish appearance. It was a dark, depressing contrast to the bright, blonde Ester. Mary then noticed the desk in the corner and the laptop that lay upon it.

“You have the internet here?” Mary asked.

“Yes, it’s about the only thing that helps me keep my sanity…” Ester cringed as she said something she felt she shouldn’t have again.

“Well, you should totally hit me up online. Just look me up on facebook, I practically live on the internet.” Mary perked up a little and sat down on the large bed. Upon doing so, she felt her hand come into contact with something under the sheets. After a quick feel she still couldn’t determine what it was.

“I will be back in a second.” Ester excused herself from the room.

Mary’s eyes lit up like two 100 watt light bulbs. Once Ester was out of the room, she forced her hand under the sheets and confirmed her suspicions. Mary gazed at the shiny pink surface of what appeared to be an eight or so inch dildo. Mary peeked over at the door. She really wanted to go peer in on Ester, who was probably peeing. However, Mary decided she would do a little snooping to find out more about the girl instead. She quickly stuffed the dildo back under the sheets and walked over to the nearest dresser. The top drawer contained several stacks of clean underwear and some bras. The other drawers contained some skirts and shorts all the way until the bottom drawer. Mary slowly pulled it open and caught sight of another peculiar object poking out from under some clothing. It was another, larger dildo and beside it was some lubricant. Mary quickly shut the drawer and walked over to the window just as Ester reentered the room.

Mary’s thoughts were a jumbled mess. Ester wasn’t any different from any other girl; they all enjoy playing with themselves just the same. There was something different about this situation though.

“Find anything interesting?” Ester said.

Mary froze in place. “Oh shit!” Her mind screamed at her as she turned around.

“Listen, I’m sorry. It’s just that I get so curious about people when I don’t know anything about them. After finding…” Mary stopped as Ester walked over to the bed and held up the cylindrical sex toy.

“Uhhhh…” Mary was stumped for words. How the hell did this happen to her. She was always the one in control.

Ester walked over to her; dildo in hand. “You won’t tell anyone will you?” Ester looked a little red.

“No… Of course not! You should see the kind of things I like to use.” Mary smiled.

There was an awkward silence.

“Listen, Ester…” Mary paused for a second. “Don’t take this the wrong way, but I think these toys are a little unnecessary…I mean, with a body like yours and that gorgeous voice, you shouldn’t have any trouble getting a boy toy.” Mary stared at the girl from Norway as she quickly regained her usual composure.

Ester was silent for a few seconds before letting out a long sigh. She walked over and sat on her bed and rested her face in her palms.

Mary quickly came to the conclusion that the subject was a depressing one for the girl. “Why the hell is she such a depressed girl!?” Mary thought to herself. “I hate it when people are like this!” Mary was furious with herself thinking that she did this to her.

“I think I should go…” Mary softly said as she made her way for the door.

“Uhh, Mary…” Ester spoke up.

Mary turned around and found the girl standing right in front of her.

“Don’t take this the wrong way… but…” Ester leaned in on Mary.

Mary’s eyes opened wide as she was caught completely off guard by the situation. For one of the few times in her life… she was the one being surprised. Their lips met for just a couple of seconds as the two girl’s warm mouths embraced each other. Mary felt the butterflies in her stomach again. “Why this!? And so suddenly?!” Mary’s thoughts raced.

Once the kiss was broken off, the two girls stood there with their eyes closed.

“Thank you so much Mary…” Ester whispered as a tear fell down her eye.

For once in Mary’s life, she felt like she could cry too. It was all too confusing to try to comprehend the reason though. She was happy, sad, shocked and confused all at the same time. Mary couldn’t help herself as she leaned in and held Ester in her arms. Ester broke out into tears.

Mary quickly felt a couple of tears trickle down felt her eyes as well. She still couldn’t understand what was going on, but she now understood that Ester was glad she was here. The two girls collapsed to the floor, still holding onto each other. It must have been a good ten minutes of sobbing before Ester started to regain herself.

“It’s been so long since I’ve had someone to talk to. Someone to hug… Someone to kiss…” Ester wiped the tears from her eyes. Mary was still at a loss for words, but felt wonderful.

“You can hug and kiss me any time you’d like…” Mary whispered and glided her hand through Ester’s hair.

Ester sniffled a little as new tears fell down her cheeks. “My aunt… and my cousin… and my father… they, they were never there for me. Ever since my mother died, I’ve felt like I’ve been an orphan living amongst strangers.” She cleared her throat and wiped her eyes with her arm.

Mary was once again shocked by all of this. She felt intense sorrow for the girl. Even in a lovely house with a well off family, she was nothing more than a prisoner.

”And those men… those men she brings home… THEY’RE NOTHING BUT CRUEL BEASTS!” Ester screamed. “Why can’t they all just leave me alone…”

Mary held onto Ester tightly. It was all that she could do. She couldn’t say anything. She took in all of what Ester had said and couldn’t believe that she had to live like this. “Was she abused? Was she constantly abused?!” Her thought’s raced. “This is insane!”

Ester was in shambles here with a girl she hardly knew. Mary couldn’t believe how this was all happening. Ester must have kept it all bottled up inside for a long time and was dying for release.

“Tell you what Ester. If you ever need to get out of this place, call me, text me, whatever. Just let me know, and I will come pick you up.” Mary said. “Actually, let’s go right now. There’s a little ping pong thing going on in town and we should totally go!”

Mary perked up and Ester’s sulking was quickly quieting down.

“Come on, it’ll be fun, and you can meet some cool people I know. You’ll have all the friends a girl could hope for. We’ll be there for you.” Mary whispered and helped Ester to her feet.

With one last sniff. Ester smiled and agreed. “Thank you…”

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*One Week Later*
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The lunch table was packed with people. Mary, J.D., Ester, Jim and His friends were now a group of tightly nit companions. Mary had been hanging out with Ester every day since that incident at the girl’s house. The two of them were as close as friends could ever get, and there were obvious signs to the other people at the table that there was much more going on behind the scenes. Jim knew everything because Mary told him everything. J.D. on the other hand accepted the possibility of the two being lovers, but didn’t know if it was true. The bell rang and the lunch room was quickly swarmed with students rushing to their respective classes. Jim and his friends walked off to their class leaving the three girls at the table alone.

“Uhh, Mary, I have a quick question…” Ester looked over at her.

Mary smiled back signaling that she was listening.

“Would I be able to stay with you this weekend… My aunt is throwing another one of her things…” Ester cringed; obviously angry about it.

“Sure, that would be fun. Actually, that will be perfect because my ‘rents are going to be gone until Sunday.” Mary looked over at J.D. “Ya know, why don’t we make it a little more exciting and have a few more people over as well.”

J.D. was quick to see through Mary’s plotting. “I’ll come too… It’s been a while since we have done anything. Maybe Jim, Max, and Landis could come too? Or is this a ‘girls only’ event?”

Mary stood up and picked up her shoulder bag. “I’ll think about it.”

Another school day came and went and the weekend was now upon them. Mary and Ester made their way to the car and quickly drove off in the direction of her house house. It was always a twenty minute drive, but Mary enjoyed every second of it.

“So Ester…” Mary looked over at her companion. “What exactly happens at these little parties your aunt puts on?”

Ester looked over than back though the cars side window. “Well, there are usually a lot of men there. It really isn’t an appropriate thing I’d like to discuss. But there is a lot of sex and I try my best to ignore it…”

Mary couldn’t believe it. Ester’s Mom was a fucking whore and ran sex parties at her house!? Even with kids around… Incredible…

Mary pulled into the drive way and up to the side of the house. No one was home as usual. The two girls ran up to Ester’s room and started gathering up her belongings. There was a great urgency to Ester’s motions; she wanted to get the hell out of here and Mary was glad that she could provide her a place to run too.

In a few minutes, the two girls were back on the road and heading into town. Mary kept her eyes on the road for the most part and smiled as she thought about the wonderful weekend they were going to have. Ester wiggled a little in her seat. Mary glanced over. Ester was cringing a little. Mary pulled over to the side of the road. They were still in the back country so no one was around.

“If you need to go, now would be the best time too do it.” Mary sighed.

“It’s fine. I can wait until we get to your place.” Ester responded.

Mary placed her hand on top of Esters. “No babe, let’s do something about it now.” The look on Mary’s face made Ester giggle a little. Mary melted from her reaction.

“Okay, it won’t be but a min…” Ester placed her hand on the door handle but Mary stopped her.

“Huh?” Ester motioned with a confused look on her face.

“Well… I was thinking that you would let me… help you…” Mary slyly responded, once again out of her usual combative character.

“What do you m…?” Ester was cut off as Mary placed her finger on the girl’s lips.

Slowly, Mary glided her finger down Ester’s chin and down the side of her neck. Despite what people may have thought, Mary and Ester where just good friends and this was the first time Mary had attempted any sexual approach. Well, they did hug and occasionally kiss in private, but nothing else really ever happened. Her finger soon turned into her full hand as it glided down Esters side and onto her smooth, girly thighs. Ester was wearing a medium sized jean skirt and Mary was soon sliding her hand under it.

Mary grew nervous. Why was she so nervous? She’d never felt like this before. For once in her life she felt scared. She pulled her hand from Ester lap.

“I…I’m sorry…” Mary sulkingly said. She looked away from her blonde companion…

Mary jolted a little as she felt Ester’s hand plant on top of hers. She looked over at her.

“It’s fine…” Ester whispered.

In an instant the two girls tugged at each other as their lips met for a full blown kiss.

They broke the kiss, looked at each other, and busted up laughing.

“So, really, what did you mean?” Ester asked.

“Well…” Mary said.

“Come on…” Ester said with a little impatience.

“I’d really like it if you would let me…” Mary paused.

Ester was starting to put two and two together.

“Please, I don’t think I could ever live with myself telling you this and having you reject me.” Mart glanced away.

“I… uh… mmmm… guess we could do it… if you want… too.” Ester softly said.

Mary let out a cheery chirp and swiftly crawled down onto the floorboard. She then put both of her hands on Ester’s knees.

After a second, Mary slid her hands up to the waistband of Ester’s white panties and tugged at them. Ester lifted her butt a little and the panties slipped off. Mary quickly pulled them down the girl’s legs and yanked them off her shoes.

“Spread your legs…” Mary said as she grabbed onto the girls right shin and placed the girl’s leg over the divers seat.

“Wow, this is absolutely beautiful…” Mary gazed at the delicate pink lips of the most cleanly shaven pussy she had ever seen. “Scoot forward.”

Ester followed Mary’s instructions. Her face was bright red and she was obviously uncertain about this whole thing. She gasped out loud as she felt Mary’s warm breath caress her sensitive, pink surface. Mary brought her hands to the gorgeous cunt and rubbed it slightly. Ester moaned out in surprise.

“Ready?” Mary smile up at Ester who now had both hands covering her mouth.

Mary leaned in and tapped her tongue on Ester’s lips. Another jolt shot through the girl’s body. Mary pushed forward and little more and had the girl’s delicate womanhood completely covered by her warm, wet mouth. Mary’s lust was growing by the second. She stared into Ester’s eyes as her tongue slowly caressed the girl’s vagina. Her motions became more and more intense as the car filled with sounds of her wet lips embracing and sucking at the girl’s pussy. Ester was having minor erotic convulsions. The experience was obviously new to her and it felt very, very good. A minute ticked by as Mary continued to pleasure Ester. The girl was still squirming a little. But she had relaxed enough for Mary to move on to the intended goal of all this.

“Okay, just relax the best you can. My mouth is your toilet. If you need to pee, pee inside of me.” Mary cooed up at the girl.

Ester still had her hands over her mouth and didn’t say anything, but she did nod; signaling she was ready to try.

Mary released her lips from the saliva, soaked pussy she had just devoured. Ester closed her eyes; Mary waited with her mouth wide open. It was like this for a few seconds before a little tickle of piss exited Ester’s urethra. Mary leaned in and accepted it. A second later, another small expulsion came from Ester. Mary slowly applied her lips to Ester’s vagina again. This time, there was a small stream coming out. Mary filled her mouth with the hot fluid then audibly gulped it down. Ester’s stream of urine was picking up more punch and was now a full blown geyser. Mary’s mouth filled quickly again and she quickly swallowed it. Her throat was hard at work as she chugged down Ester’s warm, tangy essence. Mary just couldn’t take her eyes off of the girl’s as her planted lips sucked in more piss from her body.

Ester had a look of disbelieve in her eyes. There was a girl, whose head was between her legs, and she was sucking her urine straight from her hole. Several more seconds ticked by as Mary chugged pint after pint of Ester’s ultra-warm piss. Ester tensed a few times forcing out the last remnants of her bladder’s contents. Mary sat there taking in the last of her warm nectar and in one final gulp, it joined the rest of the urine in her stomach.

“Fucking, delicious…” Mary gasped while rubbing her lips over her arm.

Ester slouched over in her seat; it obviously felt really good to piss into Mary’s mouth. Mary let out a small burp and climbed back into her seat, all the while placing Ester’s leg back on the floorboard.

“You know, there are soooo many more things we can do and we have all weekend to do them…” Mary suggested.

Ester finally removed her hands from her mouth and took a deep breath. “I can’t wait…”


Character’s ages:
Mary is 16 going on 17
Jim and his friends are 14 going on 15
J.D. is 15 going on 16
Ester is 16 going on 17


Part 2 is coming right up…

Ah classic. Good job with the last scene. And the background plot is what keeps this thing so awesome.

Not bad. Shame there wasn't any shit in this part, but I can understand it'd been a bit out of place to introduce a tragic character and then have the regular go off and drop a fatty for no good reason. Can't wait to see how things play out.

>>128

Same here as far as how the new character was introduced. Definitely love where this is going, and can't wait for what happens next. : )

>>128
>>129

What these two said.

So... does anyone want a happy ending, sad ending, or odd ending?

>>131

Are you OP? If so...I'm not sure, what do you mean by each?

>>131

I... don't... know, I mean, defaultly, I'd say "happy", but I want to know what you're trying to produce out of the "happy", "sad", or "odd" endings.

By sad, do you mean "I have to move back, and we'll never see each other cept on webcam" sad, or... "Now and Then, Here and There" sad (which borders on "nihilism and hopelessness, with a side order of disgust" and.. "sad")?

And odd... Odd how? Scandinavian girl's filthy aunt gets arrested and Mary's parents adopt her odd? Alien odd? ... Oddworld odd?

>>133

You forgot "goes to the zoo and has a public shit bath courtesy of the elephants" odd, although that might be listed under happy as well.

>>134

so... there won't be any coprophagia (thank goodness) but there'll be scat-play?!

Well, this is your fic, OP. You do what you need to do.

Waru is softcore.

>>136

I'd prefer the phrase "likes seeing girls go, as nature intended."

But hey, if you're the OP, I say do whatever you want to do. Don't stop on my account.

I'm not OP. ;o;

I've been at this site for eons, I just think you're softcore.

That's all.

I liked your new FFX fic, that was pushing it. :D

>>138

I had a FFX fic?

Oh, no, that was Phen.

;o; excuse me.

>>140

s'ok

Where is the FFX fic?

Just so this doesn't disappear.

OP Here...

Sorry for the long wait. I've been working on other things. The next part will be up very soon.

Since the last part was pretty laid back when it came to content, the next part will probably be the most extreme one yet.

>>145

Hey, I've been working on other things too. College is rough like that. We understand....well, at least I do. :)

Here it is again. ;o

ttp://www.ib4f.com/board/nyou3/fic/topic/212034

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Wow! i honestly am not really into scat but i figured i would give this a read as it seemed to be very femdom.... dear god this was a good read! i hope to see more!

It's amazing to say, but I have finally gotten to a point where I have surpassed the simple goal of downloading every arousing picture on /g/. I have now, after years of lurking, realized that /lit/ is the place to be. Moreover, I've realized that I am just as strangely turned on by shit like this (pun intended) as Jim was by Mary unloading all over his parent's backyard.

I am not the kind of guy who would actually find this arousing irl, but in a story, it is incredibly enticing and fantastic, and I commend you on it. I am a dastardly English major, and so I always want to point out ways to improve others' form, but I will refrain. That's where linguistics comes in: as long as the message is understood, then it's still language.

And I must say, the message was understood fairly well, to the point that I might even be able to fap to the idea of this story.

Keep up the good work, and don't be shy to invent a completely-bullshit-yet-still-Anonymous name here in /lit/. On a side note, the second and extremely sadistic part of my story is about to be published, and if you're into scat, then you might enjoy a certain part of it. Check it out once I post it here in a few mins.