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2 Name: Anonymous : 2008-08-26 19:56 [Del]
Eh, ode to fail poetry.
3 Name: sickness : 2008-08-27 02:08 [Del]
4 Name: Anonymous : 2008-08-27 05:01 [Del]
Meter exists for a reason
5 Name: Mitsuko_Perez : 2008-08-27 12:53 [Del]
Not bad sickness, it has potential I'd give you that. The other trolls just don't have much taste and they always put down people's work.
6 Name: Anonymous : 2008-08-27 15:18 [Del]
Grammar, punctuation, and proper spelling is a must for literary works. It isn't trolling, it's standards. If you can't write decently, expect no mercy from criticism.