The Saw Gut-Ripper Trap

this is an idea for a little trap that could air in the saw movies i wrote this within 15minutes after watching all four saw movies in one weekend ok here it goes.

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The girl woke up to a dimly lit room with flickering lights. She is completely naked and when she inspects herself notices she has strings running into her mouth and out of her anus. She is held by her legs.

Upon moving her left arm she rips out a wire that starts the tv she had not noticed before. <<Hello Mayella>> The recording with billy the puppet says.<<I would like ot play a game with you. For many months you have thrilled living off the pain your lies cause to others. The strings running into your mouth are tied to your larynx and a key was placed on them. The strings into your anus are tied to your intestines. If you look behind you you shall notice those strings are connected to a pulley system. As soon as this tape finishes the system will activate and who will have approximately three minutes to live. That is unless u decide to take a chance at life and pull out the strings running into your mouth. Once you get teh key u need only free your legs and you will be able to stop the machine by pressing the release button on it. Remember live or die its your choice.>> At these words the tape finished and Mayella noticed a clicking sound.

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Havent decided what comes next so post some comments if u like it or not and plz tell me what you think of it mroe to come later.

Learn to write, first. Jesus.

Wow, AOL chatroom guro. Who will have 3 minutes to live? Fantastic. And by fantastic I mean utter fail.

The cunning Protoss have dared strike down that which was immortal. Yet shall their overweening pride be their downfall, for when the assassin Zeratul murdered Zasz, his mind touched with mine, and all his secrets were made known to me.

...what?

It's a stupid trap and wouldn't fit in with the movie at all, Jigsaw doesn't do anything even a tad sexual related.

>>4

CONSTRUCT ADDITIONAL PYLONS.

is that even possible ?

He he he... larynx...

He he he... larynx...

Keep it up, you'll get there.

>>8
On /lit/ we don't ask if something is possible. We make it happen !

I kind of like the idea, if not the writing. Heh heh. Pain of her lies so she's got strings attached to her larynx.

ts;dr

thank you for the constructive feed back and if u dont like the spelling well neither do i (written in 15 minutes come on!) and speaking about nothing sexually related Double Dee i hope you actually watched the saw movies because in the third movie there is a chick who is tied up in a freezing room and she gets cooling liquid splashed on herself till she freezes to death unless the main guy frees her and guess what? shes completely NAKED so take that stupid (forgot the name)

sooo....more?

>>16
Uh huh, because nudity automatically equals sexual... idiot.

>>16

you dont grasp what he is trying to tell you, she is not naked for sexual reasons she is naked so the water will freeze her faster and more painfully. jigsaw does not do anything sexual related, he would make this traps for different reasons.

i dont really like this trap, its to simple and not scary to jigsaws potential. losing your intestines is not nearly as scary as losing your one of your lungs or stomach or another vital organ that most (stupid or smart) people would know about and intern know how much more scary it is to lose that, and having to rip apart your body or eye or dip your hand in acid to get what you need to escape is just as scary. jigsaw works on his scare factor to win over peoples minds, it you were going to lose your legs and the only way to save them is to lose your eyes you would be scared out of your mind.

i have always wanted to make a trap ill make one for you if you want to understand what im saying better

make one if you wish i do not realy care I just decided to make this for the heck of it and intestines are an important thing in your body and i do not believe you can survive long with your guts ripped out without medical help and yes its not the best trap I admit still...

>>20
Actually, the large intestine isn't necessary for survival.

And unless there's like, an infinite length of rope inside her, you're not talking about the small intestine.

i agree with 21 the intestine are pritty useless...my grandfather actualy had a large amount taken out....

ok..not USELESS but there not NEEEDDD to live

Fuck y'all I like it thus far
and it made me want to make my own series!

Make one if you wish im interested in what you can write