1 Name: Anonymous : 2008-06-03 16:12 [Del]
I wrote this and wanted to see what others thought of it. I know its short. Might expand on it if people like it.
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There is nothing. A white plain streaching for what seems like nothing in all directions. Then she pops into exsistnce. Slowly she opens her eyes, realising she had them. she floats, arms wrapped around legs tucked to her chest. She starts to breathe, chest rising and falling with each breath. Slowly she begins to grow selfaware of her own existance. Slowly she opens her mouth. "Hello?" She asks. Though getting no reply, she was alone. "What the hell?" She yells out into the void. "Why did you take me? Am I to be stuck here without reason? Without need?" She shouts again, floating in nothing. She breathes faster streaching out. As her feet touch the ground grass spings up under them. "Hmm." She smirks and walks on leaving a trail of grass in her wake. "Am I a god?" She asks herself. Slowly she stops, "Spread out grass." She commands it, the grass slowly expanding at her mear will. She leans over and presses her hand to the ground. Forming a winding stream water filling it slowly. She was no mear mortal, she was a godess.
At least thats what she thought, slowly she expands her world. Trees forming and growing, leaves forming on them. She had created a lush green world. The godess goes to epand it further. She is met with somthing she had not though was possable. A wall. She had thought she had figured out this world. She was its Godess. She was the ruler of it. She bangs her fist agenst the wall. Grass forms on it. "No stop." She orders her grass, though it keeps growing. Then she looks back at her little world. The river kept filling with water, grass kept growing. Her trees were hitting the roof of her world. "Stop." She commands again, voice firm. Her world kept growing. The water started to brush her ankles. The godess pouts and kicks it. "Stop I said." The waters keep rising, the grass wrapping around her legs and waist. "I am your godess. Lisen to me!" The water rests just under her waist when she realises that the world no longer was lisening to its godess. "Somone help me?" She asks, knowing full well that no one would respond. She was alone. The waters keep riseing. Soon she was up to her sholders in water. She can almost feel it slow down. Almost to taunt her.She thrashes around. Grass holding her tight. She was going nowhere fast. It inches up her neck slowly. Untill she could feel it at her bottem lip. She tilts her head back panting hard. "HELP." She shouts, panic taking over. She was to die alone. The water covers her mouth. Nose soon following. She gasps for air. Finding none. She breathes in water, air bubbles flying out of her. Soon they start to slow, she struggles slower. Soon there were no air bubbles, her arms go slack, floating over her head.
Two men watch on from a concealed room. "Another one died. Great. Next time we let the subject form an animal. It seems the subject will want to play god. Do everthing themselfs." They press a butten, the floor opens up letting her world fall into a pit. Joining other trees and water. Other godesses, some drowning victums. Some bodys chared and a few just skin and bones.
