Suggestions for ending a story? (3)

1 Name: Armot : 2009-10-05 19:37 [Del]

Hello all. This has actually been my first time at GURO, and i must say it seems a fantastically messed up spot. I'm thoroughly enjoying myself.

To the point..i stumbled upon GURO via my hunt for some of my older stories that were lost when Deathstalker's went down. Spotting one of the stories i was after, 'Calm Indulgence' in the Lit Archives, i started exploring from there, and was surprised to find soooo many goodies in one place.

In getting back into the swing of writing, and am currently half way through a Urotsukidoji fic. If your familiar with Urotsukidoji II: Legend of the Demon Womb, this may make sense to you, otherwise....bleh. The fic features Nagumo's cousin Takeaki, after he has begun transforming into the black-skinned demon. The story is basically a rewrite of the scene in which he is fucking his female victim atop the ferris wheel.
I was originally asked to write the exploding nurse scene from the first hentai, though it's been done many, many times in story-form already, and i'm not yet daring enough to try and make it more original.

My question for anyone who might be interested is, should i remain with the canon storyline and have his victim survive the rape (only to later be killed), or customize the scene and come up with a nice, gruesome demise for her?

Also, in relation to the previously mentioned FFX Rikku fic, 'Calm Indulgence'...in addition to redoing some area's that i had gotten MAJORLY carried away in throughout that story, i'm going to be starting a Lulu snuff fic. A nifty addition is that it's going to be the FFX-2 Lulu while she's late in her pregnancy *evil grins*. Question for her story is, what kind of monster/creature from the Final Fantasy series would anyone like to see snuffing her?

Hope to be around here often.
Cheers!

2 Name: Dxx : 2009-10-05 20:07 [Del]

Here is what i think:

If you want to please just few necrophiliacs, then death is good ending, otherwise it is not since story where main character dies is tragedy. for majority of guro fans i think long rape and torture will be more fun than some mundane death and later sex with headless body.

However if we are talking about random victims you can do whatever you like, if they are disposable anyway. But do not go too much into details about victim if you think to kill her later. to be sure that readers wont get attached to her.

Of course that is just my opinion, necrophiliac guy may think opposite.

3 Name: Anonymous : 2009-10-08 17:42 [Del]

I think you should give the rape atop the Ferris wheel fatal results.
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