anyone have any suggestions or ideas for this subject?

i feel like ive been forcing myself to write lately, even when i do its a little and unsatisfying =/

write new subject matter, or take a break and play some games for a couple of days. writing is like working out, you need some time to relax the muscles. you'll need a few days to get your insperation back, and stress in RL can kill your writing boner

my suggestion is just play around with ideas. writing something else can help, but if sometimes you start to focus on that new subject. and then you forget the old subject.

Just write a bunch of non gore, no meaning stories. just stuff that doesn;t matter and varies in ideas.

First question is why do you write at all?
to do it easily you must enjoy what you do.

For example I do not like writing as much but because of big deficit of extreme stuff, there is no other way than make it myself.
So I sometimes try to write my fantasies in real time to let other also enjoy them. Writing story is almost same as reading someones else.

I would recommend you also try speed writing. Do not care much about quality, or reasons. Try to write detailed images of your fantasies and enjoy them at same time, and during breaks, invent some story fillers, to justify why that is happening.

ah, thank you to all,

i shall try all ideas, hopefully ones of them knocks me out of this writing lull i am in

anyone want to try and help me concur this through playing a game I call story lines?

Like what britney and me tried to do, but only with my kind of content (tits and violence)

if your interested just let me know =)

I'm having the same problem with me story... The Nasty Neighbor Girl. I want to write something everyone will enjoy, but I also want to try new things. It can be frustrating. I must have written eight different drafts so far and found that they don't do justice...

My only suggestion is to think about the direction of a story. Does it have a happy ending? Does it increase in intensity? What pace does the story move at? (Always Present, hours, days...)

It always helps to come up with an ending to a story before the beginning. Doing that gives you a path to work with.


As for story lines... I just threw this together. It can easily be continued. Whether it has a happy ending or a more sadistic ending is up to the reader’s imagination. It’s just a simple game of darts.


Lexis violently drew in another lung full of air through her tightly clenched teeth. It was a mere second of silence in a long night full of screaming and crying. Once her lungs were at full capacity, she expelled another intense shriek. Her tears flowed down her bright red cheeks and dripped from her chin. She let out her usual crying moans; it was rather pathetic to say the least. After all, who would have thought that this strong willed, perky little High School Junior would be such a fucking pussy.

"Hey man lets go try it out?" Max said to his brother.

Mark was ambivalent to doing such a thing to such a girl. Max took his brothers silence as a hint of hesitation.

"Come on, it'll be fun." Max stood up and Mark hesitantly followed. They were now in line with six people in front of them.

Mark diverted his eyes from the spectacle as best he could, but every time the blonde haired girl screamed he couldn’t help but glance over. The line moved quickly and he figured that he must have zoned out a little.

"Here... the bartender says if you hit her nips you get us all a free drink." Max took a hand full of darts from the bin and placed them in his brother’s hand.

Mark looked up at the girl. She was firmly attached to the wall in front of him a good fifteen feet way. Her body was covered with small trickles of blood and sweat. The dart tips were as thin as needle tips and they penetrated her body easily. Being so slim, they didn't do any permanent damage even in large numbers. The only protected part of the girl’s body was her eyes; they were covered by think metal goggles. One of the waitresses walked over and toweled off the target. Once she finished, it was Mark's turn to take aim at the girl.

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1 Point for Hit on Body
3 Points for Target on Belly
5 Points for hit on Breasts
15 points for Areola
30 Points (and free drinks) for hit on the Nipple

Highest Score gets to spend the rest of the night with her.

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Mark read the sign above the teen girl’s head. If he was going to do this, he might as well win. He brought his first dart into the air and took aim at the girl’s busty chest. The perky globes had been jabbed repeatedly by the darts but her pink little tips had managed to go unscathed up until now.

Why she was here and why she was being tortured was anyone’s guess. The most likely cause of her anguish probably came from pissing off the wrong person. Needless to say, whatever she did, she was getting her “just” punishment.

With a flick of the wrist, Mark flung the dart at the girl. For him, the first shot was the practice shot. He just wanted to see where the dart went when he aimed for a certain target. The sharp tip snapped into the girls left thigh and she let out another loud scream. Mark let a small smile creep across his face. He took one of the four remaining darts in his hand and brought it to eye level.

Lexis was screaming; begging for mercy; begging for sympathy. She wanted her freedom again.

Another swift release from Mark’s hand, and he planted that needled tip square center in the girl’s right tit. He swiftly took another dart and in an added second, stabbed it into the girl’s other pink tip. The girl couldn’t even scream. She just sat there, jaw struck, her chest heaving for air as intense agony swept through her body. Everyone cheered as Mark lifted his forth dart. It buzzed through the air and landed left of the dart on the girl’s right tit and penetrated deep into her areola. The fifth, and final dart was then picked up and slammed into the girl’s other areola. The girl snapped and let out a long continuous scream that dwarfed the others. Her body shook as she tried her best to shake the darts from her breasts. Mark waited a few seconds, then walked to the girl and pulled the darts from her body. Her screams died down to her usual sob.

“Well, Lexus… it looks like you’re mine tonight.” Mark softly spoke in her ear.

“M..m.m.Mark!?” She sobbed…

I'm always willing ot help mr. guro. what would we do in your game?

>>7

So you're telling me that you're taking this long because you can't get that trying something new isn't a scary endeavor? ALSO, us, your diligent audience, could even be guinea pigs (putting it bluntly) concerning what would be the best versions, and add critiquing to help you out?

Of COURSE we'll try and enjoy what you experiment with! I mean, what do you intend to do with the story, anon? Did you really want to put in that loli? Do it! Add more friends/family members? Go ahead... just no shit-eating... blecch (my personal tastes)!

>>9

I finally sat down and juggled some ideas around the other day. So far, it looks like this time around, it is going to work. Coprophagia is a fence I will not cross.

>>8

just write whatever comes to mind, keep it violent (the more violent the better), and feel free to add or kill as many girls as you want

i shall start.



Andrea, Lacy and Kayla were best friends as long as they could remember, and every year they always would have a huge party where they would invite all their girl friends and sleep over one of the 3 girls house.

This year it was Kayla's turn, and now that the girls were old enough, Kayla had convinced her mom to have a night out on the town, leaving the house alone for the girls.

Around 7pm the rest of the girls started to show up, starting with Stacey, then Rachelle. A half an hour later Meghan arrived, then right after her Kelley, and the last girl to show up was Mandy.

Little did they know that although all the girls were at the house, there was still one more person who'd be coming to their little slumber party... Weather her was welcome or not....



Ok now erb, you just continue where i left off, continue it for about a paragraph and leave it go for whoever wants to add more to it. But keep an eye on it, because anyone who wants to add can add, just so long as they dont completely ruin the story.

>>10

Sweet (yay, more story, and I'd love to read it), and thank God (No Hot Lunch for me. No spank you, helpee helper!)