RUK AND SAMMY
A hard rite of passage


The two young wolves sat together on a hill overlooking the rest of the pack. They were still in their first year.
Sammy looked at Ruk’s bit ear. It was getting infected. He came close and licked it.
Ruk appreciated the attention and was grateful for his friend’s devotion.

Ruk said, “All’s I have to do is look at any of those bitches and Big Daddy comes after me like he’s gonna kill me. All day long he fucks them and at night they help him hunt. He won’t share them with anyone. Remember My Uncle Jasper? Well he’s gone too. He went to join the Outsiders.”

Sammy cocked his head. “Outsiders?”

Ruk continued. “Yeah, that’s where Jasper went. A soon as any of us males gets old enough to start getting a knot for cunt and we can’t keep our cock sheathed, Big Daddy drives us away. He tried to kill me and if you go back he’ll do the same to you.”

Sammy looked down and in the distance he could see the Head wolf humping a bitch.
Big Daddy was smelly and mean. He wanted everything for himself.
Ruk told him that Big Daddy was an asshole.

Ruk looked at Sammy. “You think we could kill him?”

Sammy wasn’t nearly as brave as Ruk. He could see that Sammy wouldn’t be reliable in a fight but he didn’t hold it against him.

Sammy asked. “Where are the Outsiders?”

Ruk answered, “That’s the pack that shadows Big Daddy waiting for him to falter. It’s all our brothers that were driven out. Jasper is with them now.”
Sammy asked again. “Yeah, but where?”

Ruk sniffed the ground and then scanned the horizon. “They are never very far and they are always just out of sight. I can tell that they were here last night. We have to get out of sight of Big Daddy’s pack and run a circle around it. The outsiders will be somewhere along that circle. If Big Daddy moved, they move.”

He continued.
“The thing that pisses me off is that if one of the Outsiders sneaks in to get a female, they squeal on him and he has to run like a criminal. I guess they like that smelly old dog”

Without warning, Ruk hopped up and pinned a field mouse.

He looked into mouse’s beady black eyes and said, “Sorry.”

With that, he bit off the head and forequarters. Ruk left the hind quarters for Sammy.
The poor mouse’s destiny was now split between the two wolves stomachs.

Ruk looked at Sammy and said,
“Why don’t you and me join the Outsiders? I know we can find them.”

Sammy thought about it but he was dominated by Ruk so the answer was assured. Tails high, they headed away from Big Daddy’s pack and into the forest.
The two young wolves were deep in the forest when the sun began to set. A large owl peered down at them from high in a tree. It had a mouse in its talons.

Ruk looked up and said. “Go fuck yourself!”

On this night, there was no moon so even for wolves it was dark. Sammy was shaking.

Ruk came up to him and said, “What’s the matter with you?”

Sammy’s voice was strange. “I’m lonely and I miss playing with the puppies.”

Ruk acted exasperated. “Well we can’t go back now!”

Suddenly they both heard it. Then they heard it from the other side. Whatever it was it was surrounding them. Then there was a growl and it was multiplied several times over. A large, mean and angry wolf snarled and came forward.
Both Ruk and Sammy’s tails curled under their hind quarters in fear and dread. Another and another wolf came forward and they looked just as angry. It was the Outsider pack.

The head wolf spoke. “Aren’t you pups a little young to be running from Big Daddy. Don’t you know all's you have is lie on your back and show him your pecker and butt hole?”

Other wolves were causing a commotion behind them. Their cocks were knotted and stiffly exposed. The scent of wolf urine hung in the air. Both Sammy and Ruk kept turning around trying to face their attackers but they were too many. Even Ruk was paralyzed with fear. Fights among the other wolves broke out but the focus was on Sammy and Ruk.
Two wolves trapped Sammy in place and he was mounted by a third. Ruk’s identical fate swiftly followed.
The pain of what was happening didn’t hurt Ruk as much as hearing Sammy’s high pitch cries.
In the dark forest, the horrible sounds of yelps and howls caused all other animals to flee.
It seemed to go on forever and then, it just ended.

The scene of the two young wolves lying separately on the forest floor looked ghastly in the grey morning light. Ruk was awakened by a sniffing snout by his ear. He looked up and it was his Uncle Jasper.

He spoke to Ruk.
“I tried to stop it but I couldn’t so I stayed away until it was over.
Hackles kept saying “It is written.” I still don’t know what that means. He said that this had to happen if you are to join us. He said that next time you have to fight back.”

Ruk lifted his head and softly said, “Who is Hackles?”

Jasper answered him. “That’s the head wolf. He says that when we kill Big Daddy he will be in charge of the females. Listen, Ruk, you’re alright now, the pack will accept you.”

With great difficulty, Ruk got to his feet. His gate was uneven and shaky. He almost fell but he was determined to go over to Sammy. He looked asleep. Ruk licked his face. It was cold. He lay down next to him but could not get the warm he was accustomed of getting from Sammy. He knew that Sammy was dead.

Ruk mourned Sammy and the cold settled into his heart.
He thought about Big Daddy's pack where he was born and he thought about the cruelty of the Outsiders.
Then he looked up and saw Jasper, waiting. Ruk turned away and went even deeper into the forest.

Jasper called to him. “Hey, come on, let’s go.”

Ruk briefly looked back but kept going.

On this day, Ruk had become a lone wolf.

you;re going to get some stuff for being a furry. but please, don;t take it hard. its cool, and I liked the story.

More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

What the fuck. This is not FurN.

>>2
>>4

Alright. Literary-wise, that wasn't too bad. Grammar structure alright, and didn't see any major holes in the spelling. Plot-wise was a little weak but meh, most people are here for fap material, or at least something racy!

However, the positioning... not so good. Where was the gore? o_o All I saw was a furry being gang-raped, followed by waking to find his boyf- *cough* best friend was dead. Touching story, really.

Furry isn't my issue, in case you get that in your britches. I has a girl who hangs out on VCL whenever she can, and she often is browsing over gay gangbang wolves or similar stuff.

But this is gurochan. Cut 'em up, strangle 'em, let us enjoy their being killed, the fear of them, the sound and taste. The section where they were abused was woefully inadequate for the label of "guro literature". Taxi Driver had more gore in it.

Have Big Daddy ripping their cock off, or tearing into a rebellious female eager to join the Outsiders! Have Uncle Jasper take his teeth to Hackles for Sammy dying. Or better yet, have Ruk do it, and become head of the Outsiders.

TL;DR - Gurochan = needs gore. Get to it.

>>5
This. A lot of people hate furry, I don't care as long as you provide the guro.
Looking forward to next chapter (will their be a next?). Just put in some guro this time.

*facepalm* Fail furryfag story is fail.

>>7
Calling out fall while doing the whole RP *facepalm* bit?
Oh wow, someone has quite the nerve.

>>8
*fail sorry, need a new keyboard.

First of all, the one wolf got fucked to death. Where else could I put a story like this? Second, there is plenty of guro here so broaden your horizons a little. I admit that it is grim and not guro but just fuckin relax or ban me so i can tell everyone i was baned from a guro site.

>>10
Look, we're vicious fuckers over here. You really need to have lots of blood and gore and brains everywhere and all that good stuff to satisfy us. I didn't think it was a bad story, I actually enjoyed it (I know FURRY=HERESY! Just save it), but next time a character dies be a lot more descriptive and a lot more disgusting. And when is the next update?

My apologies, Thank you to Erbium,Anonymous and Benji Z-man for the thoughtful critique

>>12
Your welcome. Don't get discouraged, most people here have an aversion to furry and seem to be somewhat touchy as it is, so don't expect everyone to be as even-handed as ,say, Erbium or Benji.

no worries. I cant; wait to read what you make next. though... and I agree wiht you on gore, there could be abit more blood. with animals... ther;es alot of potential. but its up to you.

bump