Shinigami's Agony (11)

1 Name: BrainLurve : 2009-09-19 03:48 [Del]

This is the very first story I ever wrote, I have NEVER wrote any literature before, plus English is not my 1st language so… please bear with me. Comments are greatly appreciated.

Contain = Guro, brain/skull, mild scat.

The icy cold floor has waked up Kuchiki Rukia. Slowly opening her eyes, she frowned as she struggled to focus her blurry vision on her surroundings. As her visions become clearer, she found herself in unknown environment. She is laying on a dark metal floor, each of her ankle were held by collars that were chained on the floor. She found it difficult to get up, as her hands were bound tightly behind her back, but she was glad that she can still move her legs freely though within a limited area only. Sitting up, she pressed her back against the metal wall as she continue to observe the cell that held her.

Rukia wasn't sure where she was, the spiritual particles that she sense in the air is the only clue that is telling her that, she is still inside the Soul Society. But contrast to the ivory white tower that she was imprisoned moments ago, she is now held in what seems to be a cell with dark metal walls. She couldn't find the exit, only weird tools hanging on the wall and ceilings. Some appears to be hooks and claws, others looks like pincers and mechanical arms, while the rest, can only be some science instruments of a mad scientist.

Suddenly, Rukia heard noises, she turned towards the source of the noise and spotted a familiar figure about 10 feet from where she is. "VICE CAPTAIN MATSUMOTO!" Rukia yelled as she recognized the person as Rangiku from the 10th Division. Rukia noticed something is wrong from the usual energetic and cheerful Rangiku. Covered in stain of blood, she appears to be not paying any attention to Rukia at all. Rangiku was kneeling, with both her hands and legs bound the same way as Rukia's. She is still in her Shinigami kimono, but it was being pulled down to her waist, exposing her enormous sized breasts. Her gorgeos and silky blonde hair were covering one third of her face, she was drooling and gasping, eyes staring down on the floor but unfocused. Tickles of blood are dripping from her forehead down to her chin, suggesting that she was sustaining injuries on her head, but the wound is hidden in her hair. "Matsumoto-san..." Rukia called to her friend again in softer tone.

Suddenly, Rangiku violently jerked her body upwards, followed by an agonizing scream. "AAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaAAAAAAAAAAAAAARGGHHH!!!!!!"
"Rangiku-san!?" the surprised Rukia yelled at her friend again. Still ignoring Rukia, still screaming, she began trashing her body from side to side, before slamming her head hard on the dark metal floor, and continued her agonizing spasm as her scream grew softer and softer. "No!! Stop... please!! Stop! I beg of you... no...." Rangiku murmured. Shortly after that, Rukia saw what seems to be the most horrible scene she ever witnessed. Rangiku seems to finally recognized the terrified Rukia not far away from her, "Help me.... help...me..." she tried to crawl towards Rukia, but the constrains on her ankles prevent her from moving nothing more then a few feet from her position. Rukia was staring into Rangiku's tears covered eyes, when Rangiku violently spasmed her head upwards again. She staring upwards, her mouth is now wide open as if she's making a silent scream. Suddenly her right eyeball began twisting unnaturally to the right and she slammed her head on to the ground again.

Her bound hands are clawing on air, her foaming mouth began to murmured gibberish as her body began twitching uncontrollably, her lower body is humping on the ground none stop, as if she is being fuck by an invisible cock. Suddenly Rukia heard a sick "snap", and Rangiku's body gave one final violent jerk, blood began splurting from her orifices - her eyes, her nose, her ears and her mouth are drench in stain of blood. Followed weird squishing sounds, Rukia knew that was Rangiku wetting herself and losing control of her bowel, as the stench of filth began to fill the room, Rangiku's body is still spamming her death throes, shaking uncontrollably and a violently spasm every now and then. Suddenly, Rukia noticed the squishing sounds, this time its not from Rangiku's soiled crotch, its coming from her orifice! Rukia watch in horror as small tendrils began pushing out from inside of Rangiku’s head, her right eyeballs were being pushed out of the eye socket to give way to the bursting tendrils. Rangiku gave a final spasm before her body rested motionlessly. But the movements of the tendrils on her orifice somewhat added some life in her dead corpse.

"Heeheeeheeeeheehee..." a manacing laugh broke out from the room. As a figure clad in a white coat began to emerged from the steel wall, with part of his hidden body seems to blend into the darkness of the room. "I have gathered more data then I had anticipated... hehehheee... not bad indeed for a big breasted milk cow... heheheee..." it was Captain Mayuri of the 12th Division, also the President of the Shinigami Research Institute. "But the readily hole on the specimen's skull seems to fasten the infestation of the Brain Feeding Worm..." talking to himself, Mayuri slowly walked next to Rangiku's corpse, he seems to be unaware of Rukia's present. "I wonder how will be the infestation speed if the victim is to be attacked by normal means..." Suddenly, a soft clink ringed across the room, it is from the chain on Rukia's ankle as she made a small movement, she is in a total shock.

For a momment, Mayuri did not show any sign that he noticed Rukia. Then, without changing his posture, he glared at Rukia with the corner of his eyes. He then slowly turns his body towards Rukia. "Ahh yes... the noble one... how rude of me to kept you waiting!" Grinning greedily, he raises both his hands slowly, as if he is about to embrace his fragile new born child before him. "Well now, let us find out how well one from the noble family can do to benefit the enthusiasm of my research.... Shall we?"

to be continued… (?)

2 Name: Iconoclast : 2009-09-21 15:42 [Del]

Oh. My. GOD. What the fuck was going on in your head when you made this?

3 Name: Anonymous : 2009-09-21 19:31 [Del]

Continue it. I hate Bleach but this is hot.

4 Name: BrainLurve : 2009-09-23 01:17 [Del]

thanks for the comments guys.

but i really hope that i can get more feedback before i continue... critics or ideas, anything that could help. thx!

5 Name: Mysterious Anon : 2009-09-23 08:44 [Del]

Maybe a torture session with Orihime where she gets tortured and punished for going to las noches. You could have her punishment involve being studied and eventually being killed by this guy in order to work with your theme and maybe involve some tit destruction since they are such good targets.

6 Name: Anonymous : 2009-11-13 09:46 [Del]

bamp

7 Name: Anonymous : 2009-11-15 16:59 [Del]

Bump for senseless bleach guro and maybe scat

8 Name: Anonymous : 2009-11-16 13:17 [Del]

looking forward to Rukia's suffering =D

maybe throw in Orihime as well maybe have him see how well she can "Reject" the skull attacking beings

9 Name: BrainLurve : 2009-11-17 20:39 [Del]

oh wow thank you for the response. glad that you guy like it.

i'm working on the 2nd part now hopefully it'll be up to ya'all's expectations!

10 Name: Anonymous : 2010-01-06 00:56 [Del]

looking forward to it

11 Name: Anonymous : 2010-01-10 01:37 [Del]

hehe. fucking love Mayuri, looking forward to next installment
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