1 Name: Stankmeister : 2009-09-12 16:27 [Del]
Maria Renard ran through the haunted walls of Dracula's Castle.
She looked around to see if any monsters were around, and squatted near a wall. "Thank goodness..." She began to pull down her shorts and underwear and started to pee on the hard marble.
"Aaaah, I haven't relieved myself in a long time," Maria sighed blissfully. She then began to relax her rectum and was about to let her brown snake out, when something entered her anus.
"W-What?" Maria turned around and saw a lamia-like Medusa, her tail tip plugging Maria's anal tunnel. Maria screamed as Medusa lifted her into the air and placing her hovering over her upper body.
"What do you plan to do with me?" Maria demanded of the Gorgon. "I'm going to have your shit as a snack." The snake woman grinnned and used her coils to force out Maria's brown sludge.
Medusa opened her mouth wide and began eating the shit that was falling from the young Renard girl's anus. "Stop this!" Maria screamed as her bowels continually churned out shit.
Medusa happily kept feasting on her victim's scat as Maria couldn't fend off her attacker, lest she turn to stone if she looked at Medusa directly.
"Now I need something to drink," Medusa licked her lips and patted her round and fat belly. "And you're going to give it to me."
Maria began to cry sliently as Medusa leaned towards her vagina and tickled her urinal hole with her tongue. Maria began to uncontorllably pee into the Gorgon's moutn.
After drinking her fill of Maria's pee, Medusa set her down onto the floor. Maria moaned as she regained to catch her breath. Suddenly, Medusa used her tail to rip off her outfit in one go and placed her scaly ass hovering over Maria's body.
"Now it's my turn to give something back to you." Medusa patted her big, flabby belly and began to force out her sloppy shit onto Maria's stomach and chest. "STOP! PLEASE STOP!" Maria screamed out through Medusa's defecation upon her face.
Medusa sighed as her belly thinned out through her defecation and turned around and saw the scat-covered Maria. "You look so beautiful..." she smirked as a bulge appeared in her throat.
Maria screamed as Medusa vomited on her body, covering her in a mix of scat and bile. "Oh, gods!" Maria sobbed hysterically as she cried in anguish.
But her anguish had only begun...
TBC.
2 Name: Anonymous : 2009-09-12 16:54 [Del]
What...the...fuck?
3 Name: Anonymous : 2009-09-12 21:10 [Del]
4 Name: Anonymous : 2009-09-13 01:01 [Del]
Like the scat but dislike the lag of guro.
But I still like it. :D
5 Name: Anonymous : 2009-09-13 10:37 [Del]
Let me tell you this, I'm usually not into eating but I love this fic, maybe because the "eater" isn't human. Good luck with part 2 ( though I suggest you not to post it on new thread, I prefer one long thread with many chapter like Nasty Neighbor)
6 Name: Anonymous : 2009-09-13 13:10 [Del]
Please stop writing literature and GTFO.
7 Name: Anonymous : 2009-09-13 15:12 [Del]
Gtfo
8 Name: Anonymous : 2009-09-13 16:42 [Del]
This was very dumbed and straightforward, nonliteral, slappy descriptions, ridiculous situation, and just generally stupid.
However it did provide me with a semi hardon so I guess it's ok.
9 Name: Sis : 2009-09-14 08:18 [Del]
If you put some effort into it, it could be a good story, it has potential.
Would anyone be up to re-writing this?
10 Name: Anonymous : 2009-09-15 01:53 [Del]
I agree, I actually enjoy this to a degree, but it's too short.
11 Name: Anonymous : 2009-10-02 09:49 [Del]
Can you redo this but with more effort?
12 Name: Anonymous : 2009-10-09 11:00 [Del]
I agree, I'd like to see a longer more detailed re-write. And more vomit! Ha ha ha.
13 Name: Sis : 2009-10-09 15:30 [Del]
But who is going to do it?
