Creative Deaths for stories. (34)

1 Name: Lady_wHY? : 2009-09-03 15:33 [Del]

Alrighty then, I'm writing a story and in it many poor people shall die. Buuut I want to make it as creative as possible. So I figured, you guys would have more than your fair share of ideas.
Basiclly, try to think up how to kill a person. This is an entier town I'm killing here so young, old, middle aged... boys and girls alike. It doesn't need to be sexual. And the murderer in this particular story isn't exactly human so think horror story character with the ability to mentaly manipulate blood and command helldogs. If that made sense to you guys >.>
SO yea, any ideas you guys have. I may post the finished product up here. And if there's any particular character you'd liek to see killed, gimme a name and basic description?

2 Name: Sis : 2009-09-03 15:43 [Del]

>I may post the finished product up here.

If you want our help, then you better well post it here!

Don't ask for ideas, ask for requests.

Say "I wanted to an X or a Y story, but I am willing to take requests to give you what you want"

3 Name: Johny Guro : 2009-09-03 17:25 [Del]

>>1


lol read my stories =p tell me if you like them and i'll help you out =)

4 Name: Johny Guro : 2009-09-03 18:33 [Del]

lady why, you need a victim

http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t251/maxmyth/punk1.jpg

http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t251/maxmyth/l_dceffbd97b9e4f8189de8cd86bbab2c6.jpg

http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t251/maxmyth/Asia2.jpg


=) and these are my pics of my fav fantasy character,

i call her andrea and alot of my stories involve her, she is pretty much my perfect idea of a girl in a story.


can she suck a dick to death? =P

and if you need more ideas just email me at fiendfilms@yahoo.com

because i'd be very interested in seeing how this goes =P

5 Name: Lady_wHY? : 2009-09-03 19:19 [Del]

Why, I do believe I've read a few things with Andrea. I'm sure I can have some fun with her. Thanks for the pics.
http://x-marionette-x.deviantart.com/art/andro-metamorphose-4-69023832
My killer is based on her. I'm sure they'll have fun together. :}

6 Name: Johny Guro : 2009-09-04 03:38 [Del]

Oohhhh!

I like the killer =P

And i forgot to mention, prolly goes without mentioning really, but Andrea has huge tits and that needs to be addressed in the story and then changed drastically, and very painfully =P


A few ideas for ye

- Inject Andrea's tits with some sort of acid, melting them instantly, or something that would cause them to expand, and then explode in a gory mess =P


- Have her be in a shallow ditch, chained to the ground somehow. The ditch is perfectly her size, it was made for her actually, just so your killer could kill her. So the ditch is only 6 inches deep, and Andrea is pretty much inside it, except all of her massive 34dd's are above ground =p LAWNMOWER TIME!
I will let you decide how gory that would be =P

- Have her tied onto the bumper of a car with her hands tied behind her back, laying face down on the street so when the car starts to drive the first thing that grinds away are her huge tits =)


all ideas i've thought of before but never used =P please feel free to use all of them, as long as I get to chose the girl it would happen to =P

7 Name: Lady_wHY? : 2009-09-04 15:55 [Del]

Vereh vereh nice. I'm sure I could find a way to work allll of these in. And your "Can she suck a dick to death?" Idea actualy sparked something of all it's own for which I must thank you.
Hehe. I think I'll post it as I go, not enough of it to warrent posting yet tho..

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9 Name: Anonymous : 2009-09-04 18:01 [Del]

To be honest, the "destroyed tits" stuff is kind off a turn off, but "Can she suck a dick to death?" Now there's and idea! I guess my main fetish is sex being used to kill girls.

10 Name: Johny Guro : 2009-09-05 08:48 [Del]

>>9

lol i just wrote a story where a girl has pigtails, and the pigtails get tied behind her killers waist while he is gagging her with his cock, so she is trying to pull up but the pigtails hold her in place, and she suffocates on his cock =P

11 Name: Anonymous : 2009-09-05 20:41 [Del]

>>10
YESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYES

12 Name: Lady_wHY? : 2009-09-05 21:19 [Del]

>>10
Niceness. Where could I go about finding this story to read??

13 Name: Johny Guro : 2009-09-06 07:30 [Del]

Im gonna post it in a bit, sometime today =)

make sure to check out for it and leave comments =P

14 Name: Johny Guro : 2009-09-06 07:30 [Del]

>>12

and if you like it lady why, you should record an audio version of it for me, im a big fan of having all my stories recorded by women =)

15 Name: Anonymous : 2009-09-07 16:02 [Del]

breasts on a railway track

16 Name: Anonymous : 2009-09-07 18:43 [Del]

A girl tied up and having her tits used as punching bags until they rupture, then bleeding out to death.

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18 Name: Lady_wHY? : 2009-09-09 14:55 [Del]

Very nice guys. I'll prolly find a use for most of them. Buuut, you have given me no ideas for killing off the guys :O And like I said, it doesn't have to be sexual (Though these ones are rather fun...)

19 Name: Anonymous : 2009-09-09 16:35 [Del]

>>18

How about a guy who wants to hurt a girl's tits (you've got a ton of other input on that already), but she offers him a trade where she gets to off him however after?

Using >>16 here, what if instead of having her left to bleed out to death, after her tits are ruptured she gets a turn at rupturing his nuts?

20 Name: jazzman : 2009-09-09 20:46 [Del]

how about gutting her than ripping her jaw off and leaving her on display...:)

21 Name: Anonymous : 2009-09-10 17:23 [Del]

MAN TIES 12 YR OLD GIRL TO SURGERY TABLE. MAN CUTS LEG HALF OFF VERTICALY SO THE BONES ARE SPLIT IN HALF WHILETHE LEG REMAINS THE SAME LENGTH. MAN SUCKS OUT MARROW REPLACES WITH BOILING LED. GIRL HAS LIVE SEWER RAT SEWN INTO HER VAGINA AND SLOWLY DIES OF INVECTION WHILE BEING SODOMISED......thank you Marquis D'Sade

22 Name: Lady_wHY? : 2009-09-10 17:35 [Del]


All very nice ideas. I even know just how to put >>20 together. :} *Ponder* And except the tit-abuse ones, everything here can be adapted to some poor guy instead of a girl. My many thanks.
Shouldn't take me long to write with all these great ideas floating about. Feel free to provide more if you so wish though.

23 Name: Somefurry2 : 2009-09-11 23:42 [Del]

Lady_Why?, are you still checking this thread for ideas? I know it's been a couple of days and your last post seemed rather finalized, but you also seemed to leave the gate open for more suggestions.

To be honest on the one hand I'm very glad that you've been open to new ideas and that you would go so far as to make a thread like this, but on the other hand I've been kind of disappointed in the ideas people have been giving you. It seems like everybody's trying to get their favorite guro scene in your story, and while I suppose I can't blame them for that it might not work out the best for you.

You've only given us a little bit of information concerning what your story is about, like in >>1 when you talked a little about your main character that seemed supernatural in origin. It seems like people might have missed what you said, though, so I can talk a little about the abilities you said your character had.

First, blood manipulation has a lot of different possibilities. I'm very glad you decided on something like this, because I think it's very poetic. Have you come up with ways you plan on using this yourself? It might be easier to talk about expanding on something you already thought of rather than try and cram new ideas into the story. But anyways:

Blood Manipulation Ideas:

- Exsanguination (Bleeding to Death): There are different ways you can go about doing this as well. This is a versatile form of death because you can either make it quick or drag it out for some time as well. Depending on size the average human body contains between 10-12 pints of blood, which is about a little over one gallon to one and a half gallons. A quicker death could involve all that blood bursting out of the body at once. Depending on how sexual you wanted it to be you could choose those particular orifices, but otherwise you could have victims vomiting up all their blood or etc. You don't even need to use a natural escape, you can have the blood rupture through a chest cavity or the like as well.

Approaching it from a different angle, bleeding to death the slow way works more like real life. You could either make this part of a normal death-someone with an injury or missing limbs bleeding to death naturally, or have it be part of the supernatural aspect as well. The example I'm thinking of as I type this is making someone with no physical injury bleed to death through the pores of their skin, under their finger and toe nails, out their ears, etc. This would let you kill a character of gradually and sustain greater damage along the way (they could lose their vision when they start bleeding from the eyes, for instance). I myself am fond of the idea of making a character in this situation panic and try everything they can to make it stop, only for all their efforts to be futile (if you did take it slow and they were only bleeding from their fingernails at first they might be forced to cut their hands off, only to have it get worse from there, etc).

- Internal Hemorrhaging/Damage: Blood is everywhere in the human body so manipulating it means you can damage any part of a victim. Organs all need blood to function, so you can destroy someone's stomach by causing it to burst, deprive someone's brain of blood (which would likely cause a lot of insane psychological damage before death), or even fill their lungs and make them drown in their own blood. Blood is mostly water and water can be one of the most destructive forces on the planet. Assuming supernatural control of blood pressure you could even make it crush someone's bones or act like a high pressure cutting tool.

I think my favorite scenario for this type would be manipulating the blood flow causing a victim's heart to beat faster and harder until it explodes.

- Blood Outside the Body: If you do have a victim pop like a water balloon do to blood pressure or just tear them apart in any number of other ways it's going to be a very messy affair. Although I think it might be less appealing to use blood outside the body, there are still some possibilities here. Just for general slaughter like I said before blood function practically the same as water and can crush, slice, rupture, etc. Depending one how supernatural the blood manipulation is you could form blades of blood, bonds of blood, or going a more sexual route bloody tentacle rape and the like.

Favorite scenario here I think involves forcing more blood into a victims body, either going for so much so that they explode or making the new blood tainted/destructive to the body.

- Transmutation: And I think that last point leads into this one, if this is supernatural manipulation of blood it could be changed into something else. One of the ideas you were already given was being injected with acid, and this would work on the same principle. You could do the same thing with any number of ideas-fire, poison, molten lead, etc.

Moving on from that the other thing you mentioned was commanding helldogs. This one I do really like for personal reasons but it's harder to comment on because I'm not sure exactly what you mean when you say Helldog. I am going to assume they're canines which beans they are capable of biting and tearing someone to death. Depending on their size you have the option of both soft and hard vore. If they breath or piss fire or have any kind of supernatural attributes you have that option available as well. For a more sexual turn I'm sure I've already seen stories here where people are gang-raped to death by dogs.

I'm really interested in seeing your story and if you get this message it would be neat to hear more about the character and the situation you intend to present. I don't know if you plan on being brutally realistic or with the more supernatural elements be more fantastic. I do think that something you should consider, whether you killer can keep people alive for torture or showing them their own organs or since you mention horror movies just having a bloody killing spree in the style of Jason Vorhees or his contemporaries.

Whatever you decide to do, I hope we get to see the story.

24 Name: Lady_wHY? : 2009-09-14 03:34 [Del]

Well thank you very very much. I appriciated all of the posts but really, I'd been hoping for something with this ammount of detail and something that touched on the abilities of the killer.
She is, btw, going to be rather torture oriented. And the basic situation I intend to use is a general... extermination. These townspeoples aren't as wholesome as perhaps they should be and now will reap the rewards of being how they are. Buuuut, as much as I want to, to share more would be giving it away. Horribly sorry.

25 Name: Anonymous : 2009-09-14 10:47 [Del]

Quad amputee her and shovel hot coals onto her.

26 Name: Slither : 2009-09-14 21:59 [Del]

Why hello there Lady_wHY?. Ive read thru this thread and noone really has given you ideas on killing the men. So without further adue... So maybe have your character seduce a man, strip him naked and then pin him to a table or the ground (just pinning him in general will work) with knives or some other blade. Then have your character, should it be in her character, work on getting him hard then pleasure herself on him using her blood manipulation to cause his blood to spray all over her naked body as she cums.
Well thats the only Idea I have thus far. I will provide more later.

(For added notes to the rest, I am a male, I just hate the gender.)

27 Name: Saynt : 2009-09-14 22:22 [Del]

you should definitely have a bloody lesbian part. maybe she takes on one of the female villagers as a helper. she could hang a guy on a hook and slit his abdomen, and as his blood flows to the floor, kinky lesbian sex ensues.

and if u don't know who this is, i'll have riidaa-sama slap u

28 Name: Lady_wHY? : 2009-09-14 22:32 [Del]

>>27
I'm a drunk, not an idiot silly. And reffering to Riidaa-sama certinly wouldn't be a give away if I didn't alredy know. And then there's the fact we're all using a derivitive of our tags...
Buuuut, I am glad you decided to suggest something. I haden't given much thought to the idea of her taking on a human helper of sorts... Now I have. You are wise (And messed up) beyond your years.
>>26
If I can find a place for it, you know I most certinly will; even if only to make you smile :} (The idea of guys dying in pain, covering a woman in their blood makes you smile. I sure know how to pick 'em.)

29 Name: Slither : 2009-09-14 23:08 [Del]

Actually Lady_wHY? Mi corazon. I have, for yours and everyones viewing pleasure written out my idea of how the scene I suggested might go. I warn everyone, it may seem a bit rushed on its own, but this is my first attempt at writing something of this nature and its only intended to be part of a larger story. But on to the scene...

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31 Name: Slither : 2009-09-14 23:33 [Del]

As I walked into the bar, taking in the atmosphere put on by the smells of booze and cigarette smoke given ambiance by the dim inadequate lighting, I noticed a few eyes fall on me. One set in particular belonged to a man, who although he wasnt gorgeous he was still extremely attractive. I walked over to him, gently dragging my fingertips along his back and sat next to him. "Why hello there. Mind if I sit here handsome?" I gave a wink, that if he had thought of saying anything but yes, he imediately changed his thoughts and gave an almost overeager "Yes." I was about to order myself a glass of rum and coke, but he quickly interjected, saying hed pay for it. What a sucker. I had no money, this had been my plan all along. Such a simple minded male. Then again that might be a result of the alchahol coursing through his veins. He also ordered himself a rum and coke, downing it rather quickly. Showing off now? I thought. I slowly sipped the delicious drink almost more intoxicated by his obvious unrelenting willingness to follow me to the ends of the earth. With a gentle hand on his cheek, as I finished my drink, I asked him, "So, cutie," I traced his jawline with a fingertip, "Wanna get out of here and have some real fun?" I knew the answer before the awkward "Yes!" spilled out of his mouth. The sheer ease of how things had been going so far already making me wet in anticipation. As we drove to his house, I reached over and rubbed his crotch, teasing him, taunting him of false ideas of what was to come. I had already come up with an idea of how I would deal with this one. Walking into his front door, I wrapped my arms around his neck, drawing his attention away from my movements with a deep, passionate kiss I slowly inched us toward his kitchen, where I was sure to find the tools I would need for this particular masterpiece. Sure enough he had a fully stocked knife block. Quickly throwing him onto the floor I went to work at undressing him, making sure my true intentions were hidden the entire time, although given his state of mind that wasnt horribly easy. After I had undressed him, I instructed him to close his eyes as I got a condom and a surprise for him. Of course these things were nowhere near where I was going. I went to the knife block, selecting the chef's knife, two steak knives, and the longest knife remaining. I slowly walked over to him savoring every moment leading up to the culmination of my planning. When the first steak knife entered his wrist and embedded itself into the floor his eyes shot open and he screamed in pain. This helped to turn me on even more, but the kicking and flailing were troublesome. I look deep into his eyes while using his very on blood to hinder his movements. As his limbs slowly succumbed to my power, i could see his pupils dialate in fear. I took the next knife, and after twirling it in front of his face, i slowly inserted it into his other wrist. His screams of pain were defening, but because we were in the middle of nowhere, there wouldn't be anyone to help him. Not that they could do much. I also inserted the knives into his ankles slowly, all the while massaging his dick which to my amazement was still slightly hard. I stood over him undressing, and then slowly lowered myself onto his member which had become stiff with my strip tease. The pain must have been horrible enough that it didn't matter anymore. Massaging my own breasts as I slid up and down his cock moaning as he wasnt exactly inadequate, I could feel an orgasm approaching but I didnt want this to end so quickly. Pacing myself sadly did no good as the orgasm crept closer and closer, I was forced to just restrain against it until I could no longer do so, his screams slowly losing intensity as the pain and pleasure of the beautiful naked woman on top of him begin to overload his senses, gradually knocking him unconcious. I finally let lose with an intense orgasm as he fell unconcious, using what will I had left to draw the blood from his pores in a wave, covering my entire front half. Standing up weakly, and licking the blood, warm and salty, off of my hands and breasts, wiping more from other parts of my body to further enjoy the taste I looked down at the man who had, minutes ago, been screaming in agony although he had came twice inside of me. As I gazed down at the blood soaked body pinned to the linoleum only one word came to mind: Art.

32 Name: Slither : 2009-09-15 04:08 [Del]

>>28
Also, love, I love how you paid no mind to Hook-san's statement about my slapping you. Granted...I dont see how he thinks itd be much of a punishment...Lol

33 Name: Anonymous : 2009-09-16 18:41 [Del]

Ooh, I like this idea for a story so far! Manipulating blood, huh? Well, you could always have someone sweating blood until they finally bleed to death.

They could be in a situation where they'd already be sweating normally, then blood would start coming out instead, adding to their stress. They'd be panicked and frantic, and the more frightened they became, the more blood they'd sweat out. You could always have a grand finish if you don't want them to just pass out and die, of course. I'm thinking something like flooding a vital organ or two with blood until it explodes, or something involving the Helldogs?

Just my two cents, haha.

34 Name: Lady_wHY? : 2009-09-17 19:21 [Del]

>>33
Thank you so incredibly much for an idea for plain, non-sexual related, death. They have been in short supply as of late. :}
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