I was really looking forward to the later portions of the story Knife Fight. What happened to it? It had a good set up of two chapters or so the day I read it, but when I checked back later in the week for the supposed update it wasn't there anymore.

I know its bloddy weird. i Posted it like 3 TIMES and it kept dissapearing. ill post it again sometime soon.

Thanks for the update!

ARRGHHH!!!! ITS GONE AGAIN!!! FOR FUCKS SAKE! I ALLMOST FINISHED PART 4 ASWELL!

I'm sorry to hear that. This thread has stayed though, so why not post it here instead?

I'm looking forward to the next part too!

Dammit!

I've had the same thing occur with one of my stories several months ago. It was posted for several hours, then disappeared with no explanation. It stayed the next time I posted it though. Either we have a weird glitch in /dis/, or perhaps someone with moderator capabilities deleting threads for unstated reasons.

alleight

ok I'll post it again for the 5th time. Just finishing part 4

and yeah from now on I'm going to post it in this thread so check back frequently.

oh btw. I'm allso going to do some drawings related to this. Is there anyway to post them on the literature board?

You might be able to get away with linking them from another page you've uploaded them to.

Speaking of which, when's the next update coming?

Later on today. Just adding a few more bits to it.

Ok its coming 2morro. I have to go out. Please guys just wait a liiiiiiiittle longer. it will be worth it. i promise ;)

Sorry about the wait guys. Here it is again with part 4

Part one.
Sarah
“That’s enough training for today” thought Sarah. She trained flat out in her personal gym for the past 17 hours straight. She is able to accomplish such a feat however due to the fact she is one of the few surviving test subjects of a “super solider” experiment that took place in the year 2349 when she was just a child. Her body is able to withstand much more punishment and stress than the average human, and she is much stronger and smarter too.
You may even say she is close to human perfection.
As she entered the bathroom for a shower she untied her sweaty brown hair, letting it fall down to the centre of her back, following with her shorts. Her body was the perfect hourglass shape that women strived for
Her legs were beautiful and smooth, but at the same time strong and powerful. Her ass was well shaped and perky, it wasn’t the biggest but it was nice and grabable. It did have some jiggle to it of course.
Her assests seemed to have a natural tan just like the rest of her honey like toned body. Most likely due to the many missions she has been on in tropical like climates. Her skin matched perfectly with her red satin panties which she soon removed, revealing her luscious and smooth vagina.
She then removed her sweaty vest top, throwing it in the corner next to the sink. Her body was perfect. Her Stomach was flat and well toned and her back was streamline and smooth. Her tanned skin shined and rippled with sweat under the bright bathroom lights.
She then stopped for a moment and looked at herself in the mirror. “I wish my tits were a bit smaller” she thought to herself. Her tits were in fact very large. DD’s to be exact. She was proud of them and always dressed so that they are showed off in the best possible way. But this time she wasn’t proud. She felt annoyed with them .“They always seem to get in the way at times when on missions” she thought on. In the last few missions she was on they did in fact get in the way. Her recent encounters and fights have had left her with bruises, scratches and minor cuts on them. She knew that they could always be healed in the injury chamber almost instantly to keep them as perfect as they are now, but she still fears for them as the chamber can only heal minor wounds with out major scaring. Any deep cuts or dismemberments will leave her with a permanent scar. Just like natural healing.
She grabbed her big natural DD breasts and pushed them against the mirror with a look of concern on her face. Her matching red bra seemed only just be able to contain them as they bulged. She knew her tits came out lucky in these last few fights and it was only a matter of time before they get heavily injured. “well at least the guys here at the federation love them” she thought as she took off her bra and entered the shower.

Part 2
Headquarters
“Commander Sparks. This is General Freeman speaking. Do you copy?” Said a ruff voice on Sarah’s wrist communicator.
“Copy Sir. Commander Sparks here. What seems to be the problem?” She replied.
“The federation have just picked up a signal on our scanners. It seems to be a VERY POWERFULL source of energy” Explained the General. “We believe it to be an ancient artefact that contains the knowledge and intelligence of the highly advanced and extinct Cleowal race”.
“What?!” asked Sarah. “We have to get to that before the Lothian Find out about this” She replied.
“The signal that was given off by this artefact was so large that we expect The Lothian also know about this. Sparks, as our best we are sending you for this mission. We want you to find this artefact and return it here to the federation or destroy it if the former option is not possible. We cannot let this get into the hands of anyone else. ESPECIALY The Lothian. This is a code black mission. Is your objective clear commander?” ordered the general.
“Yes sir” replied Sarah.
“Good. Now come to the debriefing room so we can discuss this in further detail. Freeman out”.

Sarah knew this was serious. She knew it as soon as the general named it code black. Missions are only code black when The Lothian are involved.

The Lothian are a dangerous group that are the most wanted terrorists in the whole of the galaxy. They have access to weapons and technology that rival the federation and they alone have killed Billions of innocent life through out the different solar systems.
“If they get the knowledge of the cleowal’s then god help us all” thought Sarah.
The last time the federation and the Lothian clashed both of the groups lost thousands and thousands off lives.

She put on a tight white top that came just under her breasts, revealing her stomach and chest. Her tits were squeezed in the tight top making them look even bigger and causing her nipples to show and poke through the material, It also gave her quite a cleavage .Her hair was tied back in a pony tail and her tight dark green combat trousers gripped her legs and bottom tightly showing every crack. It also held various items such as her pen knife , gun, compass, binoculars and her most prized weapon. Her 9 inch knife.
The knife has saved her many times during missions and has got her out of the trickiest of situations. Sarah made sure to take it with her

As she walked down the passage she looked out of the large windows beside her and gazed in to space. The various views of stars and planets seemed to amaze her every time she walked down there.
But the males of the space station had views of amazement also. With her revealing top, tight trousers and amazing figure she was the talk of the thousands of workers, soldiers and residents of the station.
She walked through various different corridors and passage ways, Lifts and travelators to get to the debriefing room. But this was the long way of course. She wanted to make sure everyone (especially the guys) saw her in her tight revealing top and skin tight trousers.


“Looking good Sarah!” Shouted a male worker from across the passage.
“Nice Tits!” shouted another as he couldn’t help but stare.
“SEXY!” shouted one of the residents.

She loved the attention she was getting. Sarah was the most popular girl in the space station. Men wanted her, Women wanted to be like her, Kids looked up to her and saw her as a role model.
Even though she is only 23 years old she has guys chasing her whose ages range between 16 all the way to over 50. She was very popular. Especially with the males.

“Sarah hi! You off for another mission?” asked her close mission partner Steve as she bumped into him.
They had worked together several times in missions, and she had saved his life numerous times due to his attempts of showing off to impress her failed. He had a great crush on Sarah just like everyone else.
“Hi Steve.Yeah the general just called me to the debriefing room to send me on my way.” She replied. “Good luck with the mission anyways. How about you come to my suite after the mission and we can relax a bit?” asked Steve as a smile grew on his face.
Sarah knew he just wanted to get her alone again. The last time she “relaxed” with Steve she ended up sucking his cock, making him feel like the luckiest guy at the station. He didn’t wait or hesitate at all to tell his friends and co workers the day after about it either, making them jealous. She knew that this time it may go even further than a blowjob.
“He has quite a big cock.I wonder if he can use it properly though?” She asked herself
“We will have to wait and see about that then won’t we Steve” She said softly whispering in his ear while pressing her tits upon his chest and reaching for his hardened cock. She was such a tease.
Steve just stood there staring at her tight ass as she walked away. he hoped he would be the first guy at the station to fuck her and that wish would soon come.

As she reached the debriefing room General Freeman and several other people was there to greet her. They then gave her information about the artefact, where it is, and the dangers that await her. ”Commander Sparks, the artefact is on the planet Nora in a jungle like area. There are many dangers such as traps and wild animals.” explained one of the Smart looking females. “We have suspicion that The Lothian have sent one of there best soldiers to retrieve it”.
Sarah wasn’t worried about any competition. She faced lots of people, and they all were no match for her. “How can the Lothian expect one of there inferior soldiers to come close to me?” Thought Sarah to herself.

“But you must know this commander Sparks...There agent was one of the survivors of the super solider experiment. Just like you” Explained the smart looking man.
“What?!” shouted Sarah. “I thought I was the only survivor?”. “Well we think the Lothian captured the subject as she was just a child shortly after she went through the experiment” he said. “We have been studying the training methods of the Lothian and we have come to the conclusion that she is most likely to be stronger, faster,smarter and able to take much more than yourself in pain and damage due to the Lothian training her and pushing her to the very limit. Something that you commander have not experienced” he explained.

“Can she really be better than me?” Thought Sarah.
“Do you have any idea on what there agent is capable of?” she asked.
“Yes. We know she is very unpredictable and dangerous. If you do encounter her then be prepared for a very engaging fight.” Replied the smart looking male. “Bare in mind though that we do have the injury chamber if you are heavily injured. The chances are though that you will be”.
Sarah started to feel worried. Most of the missions she had in the past involved her taking on normal people or creatures which she handled no problem, but this time she is likely to face someone who is just a good as her...maybe better. And she has no idea what to expect., and for the first time in her life she felt fear over her safety.
“Are you ready for this commander?” asked the General. “yes sir” replied Sarah bravely. She knows she won’t come out of this with a few cuts or grazes. She knows that it will be a fight to the death.

Part 3.
The fight
Sarah landed on the planet Nora. As she walked out of her Space craft she looked around the environment.
“This is so similar to earth” she thought.
It in fact was. The atmosphere and environment were almost identical. The only difference was bog like areas that were quite frequent. Humans would have defiantly migrated there if it wasn’t for the many savage and vicious animals that come out at night for prey. “11:52 am...Its going to get dark in about 6 hours” she thought to herself. “I don’t want to be out here when those beasts come out”.
She got on her way, cutting vine after vine and leaf after leaf with her knife. She was still bugged at the thought of fighting The Lothian’s agent. “I really don’t want to get in a fight with her” she thought as her heart beat faster with nerves

She approached a ledge at the middle of a raging waterfall. Across it was another ledge. This one was much larger. About 30 meters in length and shaped like a square with a little opening at the back of for a small cave. The back and sides was just a rocky wall, so it was basically a small dead end. Sarah pulled out her tracking device and it pointed her directly into the cave. She had found the artefact.
She stepped back a few times and took a large running jump to the other side of the waterfall, just managing to grab the ledge with her hands.
She pulled herself up and walked towards the cave.....and then stopped...she felt uneasy and uncomfortable all of a sudden...like someone was watching her.

Sarah approached the entrance of the dark cave and stopped dead in her tracks. A tall female strutted out of it, seeming to approach Sarah.
She was the same age as Sarah. With long flowing black hair that seemed to shine and shimmer in the sun and a creamy complexion that stood out against the tight, all black leather like body suit she wore. The zip on her body suit was undone down to the bottom of her large cream coloured tits which rivalled Sarah’s, giving her a lovely cleavage and showing the very top of her nipples.
She looked at Sarah with a cheeky look on her face and tipped her sunglasses, showing her glossy eyes to Sarah for the first time as both of there eyes met from mere meters away.
“ooooooooh you must be that agent the federation sent eh?” she asked Sarah with those full, perky lips of hers.
“And I guess your from The Lothian aren’t you” replied Sarah as they began to circle each other.
“That’s right. You can call me Cobra. And I was told about you Sarah Sparks. About how we are both similar. About how we were part of that super solider experiment years ago.” She explained. “And I was told to kill you if you got in my way of taking this artefact!” She screamed at Sarah.
“Looks like this is it” thought Sarah. The hardest fight of her life was about to begin, and she had no clue what to expect. All she knew was that if she didn’t kill Cobra as soon as possible then she won’t survive this.
The two girls stopped circling and reached for there guns. Sarah shot several bullets aimed at cobra but the back flipped and sprung into the air, successfully dodging Sarah’s attack. Cobra then took her shot in the air and rained bullets down at Sarah as she flew in her direction.
Thankfully with her enhanced reflexes Sarah was able to evade and jump at Cobra, who was hurtling at her with her guns blazing.
Both girls clashed in the air tits first at high speed causing them both to have there guns drop and fall down the waterfall beside them.
“Good. Now we will have to fight in close combat in which I can finish this quickly” Sarah thought. She pulled out her knife as Cobra did the same.
These weren’t just any little pocket knifes...They were more of a machete, only a little smaller. Probably about 8-9 inches in length.
They both ran at each other. Sarah attempted to slash at Cobra but she successfully managed to dodge behind Sarah. “Silly little girl.” Taunted Cobra as she slashed diagonally at Sarah’s back, leaving a bloody red mark of torn flesh causing her to scream and arch her back.
“Get up!” shouted Cobra as Sarah climbed back on her feet.
“Shit. I need to be less reckless” thought Sarah. “Just calm down” She thought to herself.
They circled each other waiting for the right moment to strike. Cobra Leapt in the air and brought her knife straight down on Sarah, in which Sarah managed to block and counter with her knife successfully knocking Cobra off balance as she staggered back. Taking this golden opportunity Sarah ran forward and slashed at Cobras side, tearing through her tight black suit and skin as blood trickled and ran from it.
“ughnn fuck” whined Cobra with a look of shock. She underestimated Sarah and didn’t think she would have been able to have put a scratch on her.
She held her hand on her wound and looked at Sarah who in return looked at her. The passion to kill one another was the message they both got as they now knew this was about to get serious
It was silent. None of the girls spoke. They circled each other, coming closer and closer. Waiting. Waiting for that perfect opportunity to attack. The tension was thin.

Suddenly Sarah swiped her knife upwards at Cobra with blinding speed, but Cobra successfully anticipated this and sidestepped it, grapping Sarah’s arm while it was extended in the process.
“Shit NO!” thought Sarah as her arm was gripped and raised above her.
“got ya now!” shouted Cobra as She lifted Sarah’s arm up over her head and drove her knife upwards into it at the elbow joint.
“DAAAAGGHHHHHHHHNNNNNNNN” Screamed Sarah as blood squirted from her impaled elbow over her and Cobras face. Cobra further pushed the blade up causing much more pain and discomfort for Sarah and bending her arm so its on the verve of snapping at the joint.
With one last forceful push the blade drove all the way into Sarah’s elbow and caused tendons to snap, muscles to tear and cartilage to shatter and bending it almost completely in the opposite angle.
“AAAAGGHHHHHHH!!!! MY ARM!!!!” screamed Sarah in excruciating pain as Cobra Twisted and wedged her knife in Sarah’s broken, bloody and impaled elbow, making her skin tear. The bones in her elbow began to poke out and rest on the blade embedded in her arm.
Cobra enjoyed seeing Sarah in pain. Her screams and cries made turned her on. “Ill make her last moment hell” she thought with an evil smile.
Blood squirted over the two girls with every twist and push with her knife that Cobra intentionally did. Sarah tried to struggle from Cobras grasp but it was to painful. As long as she had this knife in her elbow she was going nowhere.

Sarah then remembered her knife was in her hand at this time and Cobra was just where she wanted her to be.
She dropped the knife, making it fall half way and then caught it with her other freehand. “RAGGHHHHGGH!” Screamed Sarah as she sliced at Cobras stomach , making Cobra jump and cry in pain as blood spurted out from her chest. Cobra didn’t let go though and in return began to saw up and down with her knife in Sarah’s arm to cause her more pain.
Desperately Sarah sliced Cobra in the stomach again, spraying more blood over them both and leaving and Uneven X mark on her. Cobra’s body suit was torn, revealing her stomach and bloody gashes. Chunks of her flesh and Material from her suit splattered and flew across the floor and Sarah.
“AHHHGGGHHHH! ” screamed Cobra in pain as Sarah knife tore through and shredded her abs.
She jumped and raised her head as she screamed, but she still kept hold of Sarah’s arm and her knife.

Cobra attempted to cut through both sides of Sarah’s elbow to tear her lower arm off. Despite getting slashed across the stomach she continued to saw and cut through Sarah’s elbow in an act of desperation.
“NNNNGGGHHHH!!! Why wont she fucking stop!” thought Sarah as she screamed painfully at Cobra’s attempt to remove her arm. She attacked Cobra again, this time stabbing her in the gut 3 times.
“DARRRGGHHH! GGGGAAAAAGHHH! UUUUGGGGGGGGNNH!!!” Screamed Cobra in pain.
Sarah’s blade tore through her abs and poked her intestines and other organs. Blood spurted from Cobra every time Sarah drove her blade into her gut, spraying on the floor turning the grass red as Cobra grit her teeth through the pain. She looked down and watched Sarah slowly drive her blade into her gut .
“GAGHHHHH” Screamed Cobra as she watched the blade slowly disappear into her body and slide past her intestines. “I....can’t let her....do this.” Thought Cobra
Cobra knew she had to stop Sarah at all costs before the blade impaled her completely. In a last ditch attempt she began to pull at Sarah’s elbow to try and tear it off by the weakened joint.
“ARRRGHHH NARRGH GAGHRR!” Screamed Sarah in pain. Her elbow was ruined and the slightest touch caused her a lot of pain and discomfort. But Cobra was yanking and pulling at it forcefully giving her excruciating pain. Every twist, Every pull, every yank Cobra did to her arm cause a sickening sound.
“SNAP”
“POP”
“KKKRRRACK” Went Sarah’s arm as her skin tore, bones cracked, ligaments ripped and bones dislocated.
She sight of her arm being twisted in all these sickening angles like a wet towel made her feel sick.

“Shit! She is trying to tear of my arm!” realised Sarah. She knew she had to stop Cobra before her lower arm was torn off.
She pulled back her blade and stabbed Cobra again a fourth time by the left side of her exposed belly .
“GAGH...BLEGH..CARGCH!” splurted Cobra. Sarah stabbed her once more causing blood to squirt over there legs.
Cobra felt the blade again slowly tear through her abs and slide past her intestines. Eventually she felt the tip of it begin to poke through the muscles on her back and rub her spine. Cobra Screamed in pain as she felt The long tear through her body.
“NO! NO!!” She cried out in pain. Cobra pulled one last time with all her might on Sarah’s arm. “ARRRGGGHHH” she screamed as she pulled in desperation.

Sarah’s elbow was on the verge of being removed.
“ENNNHHHGGG!!” Moaned Sarah in pain as she grit her teeth. Every time Sarah forced her bade deeper into Cobra the harder she pulls at Sarah’s arm. And the harder Cobra pulls at Sarah’s arm the more Sarah drives her blade into Cobras stomach. They were desperate to disable each other in some way.

Both girls screamed with one last attempt and jumped back. The pain for both of them was too much.
Cobra fell onto her back and moaned in excruciating pain.
“She stabbed me.....She fucking stabbed me.” Though cobra to herself as she held her wounds. She had 3 slashes across her chest. 2 deep ones that ran horizontally just above her belly button. Another cut was slightly more angled and crossed with the first one making a flattened X mark on her.
Blood still squirted from the slash on her side she gained earlier and caused her much discomfort when she moved around.
She was stabbed several times by Sarah and some coils and strands of her intestines could be seen through the deep wounds. She turned over onto her knees and hugged her self to ease the pain.
Her body suit was heavily torn in the stomach area, revealing her body and wounds. It had quite allot of tears and rips which showed parts of her chest, hips and arms. Her under boob was beginning to show as well. She knew it wouldn’t last her much longer at this rate.
She noticed her intestines started to slip out of her stomach with a “squelch” where the 2 large slashes crossed.
“fuck...My....Intestines” thought Cobra as she tried to catch them in her arms. She grabbed them with her hands and attempted to stuff them back in her before Sarah noticed. The feeling of her own guts and her hand inside her body made Cobra twitch and shake in discomfort. The sick squelching and slimy sound of her guts moving around didn’t help either. She Brushed past other organs such as her stomach, liver and kidneys and vomited a little every time she made contact due to the uncomfortable and horrible feeling.
“NGGGHHHHAAAAGHH! I’m....Gona....kill that bitch” she thought as she removed Sarah’s knife from her gut, carefully trying not to spill and more of her intestines in the process.
Cobra rose to her feet staggering, holding her bloody stomach with her intestines poking through the gaps in her fingers.
With her face drenched with the blood of both her and Sarah and her hair tinted red with blood she looked at Sarah through stands of her messy hair with great hatred in her eyes.
“ill kill her.....ILL FUCKING KILL HER!” she thought as she shuffled towards Sarah in pain gripping her knife.

Sarah flopped around on the ground. Rolling and holding her elbow. Her body was covered in blood from both her and Cobra. Her back was drenched in it thanks to the large slash she was given earlier on. It was so deep in fact that her flesh, fat tissue, back muscles and part of her spine could be seen from it. Cobra must have stabbed her and then tore her blade straight down her back instead of just slashing her.

But it was her right fore arm that caused her the most pain. It flopped in the most impossible of directions as she held it while thrashing around on the floor in pain. It was hanging by only a few tendons’ and ligaments and anymore stress and pressure would have torn it off for good. Blood squirted from it due to the severed vein and artery that passed through it.
The muscle surrounding her elbow had been completely torn off and any normal human would have given up on it by now...but Sarah still was able to move it...it just caused her a great amount of pain.

“my arm.....no....no....my arm” she thought to herself. The bones in her elbow were visible and dislocated so her arm couldn’t help but flop in all directions it should go .
She rose to her knees and held the handle of the knife that was still wedged in her arm. With one swift pull she removed the blade, squirting blood everywhere in the process and staining her already bloody top red.
“UNNNGHHH” moaned Sarah as the blade was removed. She rose to her knees and looked up in to the sky. Her face was covered in blood and strands of her hair loosened from her band, sticking to her bloody face, making her look like she went through hell.
“She was.....going to tear off......my arm” Sarah thought. She was afraid for the first time in her life. She had never been this hurt in missions before and she knows that this fight has only just begun. She has no idea what to expect next, and for once she feared for her life.
She rose up and gripped her knife in her good hand. Her other arm dangled and flopped beside her dripping blood. She stared at Cobra through strands of misplaced, bloody hair and slowly walked towards her.

Both girls, wounded, exhausted and in pain were determined to complete their task. The only thing standing in the way was each other and they both knew that if they survive they won’t be going back with just a few cuts or grazes. They were willing to put their body on the line.

Finaly the long awaited part 4! This is realy long by the way. i got quite lost in it.

Part 4

Cobras steps to success.

“She has to fight with her left hand now. Good.” Thought Cobra.
Sarah was naturally right handed and she had no other choice but to use her left. She did train in knife combat with both hands but after all you are always better using your dominant side.

Both girls breathed heavily with pain as they slowly walked towards each other gripping there knifes. Cobra had her left hand over her stomach holding her wounds and keeping some coils of her intestines from spilling. Blood and other bodily fluids from inside her ran from her stomach and onto her hand, dripping on the grassy floor beneath her.
Sarah’s arm flopped in every direction at the elbow as she walked. Blood and flesh poured from it, trickling down to her finger tips and causing drops of blood to land on the floor. Her back poured blood from her wound as it ran down to her ass, tinting her dark green combat trousers red.

It was silent. None of the girls spoke. They just looked at each other with hatred, desperation and pain in there eyes. Closer and closer they came until they were a no more than 4 ft away. Then they stopped.
Sarah straightened herself in composure and took another step to Cobra, preparing to attack when suddenly Cobra flicked her bloody hand at Sarah, Causing blood and bodily fluids to spray all over her face. She was blinded her as she took her stride. It was dirty tactics like this that Cobra was highly trained in.
As Sarah stumbled and missed her attack Cobra knew it was time for her to strike. She grabbed Sarah from behind and raised her knife.
“Watch this” Whispered Cobra in Sarah’s ear. She then drove her knife into Sarah’s left side just under her tit.

Blood squirted over the 2 girls and Sarah spazimed wildly as the large knife entered her flesh. Ripping through her ribcage.
“BWAGHHHH!!!!” Sarah screamed as Cobra rammed and forced the blade deeper into her side.
She twisted the knife side to side and up and down in her body causing alot more damage and serious pain for Sarah.
Sarah looked up into the sky and Screamed in pain. But they were cut short, as blood suddenly exploded from Sarah’s mouth, spraying it in the air above them both and falling back down landing on there already bloodied faces.

“Wow that’s a lot of blood!” Taunted Cobra as Sarah choked on her own blood. “I suppose that’s what happens when someone stabs your lung.” She forcefully removed her knife from Sarah’s body at an angle, making sure it did maximum damage on the way out.
Blood shot out of Sarah’s mouth again with a “BHLEGH” as she fell to the floor on her knees holding her side.
“She...BLEGH....punctured my....AKKGHHH...lung” Thought Sarah as she coughed up pints of blood. Every breath she took was pure agony. It felt like someone was tearing away chunks of her lung. She struggled to breathe as she gasped and coughed on the floor.
“Nggggghhhhh....I Can’t let her kill me” she thought as she spat more blood on the ground below.

Sarah raised her head to prepare to get up and saw cobra standing right in front of her.

“Let me tell you about a special fighting technique the Lothian tech there soldiers” She said to Sarah in a psychotic way. Her eyes were now wide open and she grinned from ear to ear.
Sarah knew something bad was about to happen.

“It’s most effective when the opponent is heavily wounded and disabled. They can’t move and are on the verge of death.” Cobra explained as she took a few steps back

“Step 1: First you have to make sure there lying down.” She continued” To do this you would usually kick them directly in the face!” Screamed Cobra as she ran full speed at Sarah
Sarah saw Cobras foot flying at her face at speed but she was too weak to react and just decided to take it. Unknown to Sarah, Cobras boots were very hard and heavy. In fact they weighed over 20 kg and were laced with pure solid metal. Being a super solider she was able to run around in them like they were trainers, and Cobra kicking her with a super solider kick to the face wearing them is going to turn out MUCH more painful than she thought.

Sarah closed her eyes and braced herself. Then...“CRACK”.
Cobra smacked a kneeling Sarah directly in the face with her heavy boots. Sarah’s head snapped back at speed, almost breaking her neck with 3 times the force for a whiplash. Her Skull Cracked and fractured from the impact and blood sprayed from her mouth and nose as she was sent backwards on her back landing hard on the ground. Her knife slipped out of her hand and landed just in front of Cobra, Leaving her defenceless.
Sarah just laid there. Her vision became blurred, She couldn’t hear anything either and her whole body went numb. Her senses seemed to stop working for a few seconds.

Then suddenly they all came back.

Sarah raised her hand to her face and shook uncontrollably on the floor. Ruling and thrashing around as the pain rushed in.
“nnnnrrrgggrrraaaaaaAAAAAHHHHHHGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!” She screamed as she felt the full force of Cobras heavy kick.
“ARGGHHHHNNNNNN NARGGHHH GGGAHGHHHH!” Her screams were inhuman. They pierced and echoed through the jungle.
“FUCK! HER BOOT......WHAT HAPPEND! DAGGHHH!” She thought to herself

Cobra walked up to Sarah slowly. She still smiled. She aroused at the sight of Sarah in pain and began to get wet. She stroked her pussy through her ripped body suit as she came closer to Sarah.
“HOW THE FUCK CAN SHE JUST WALK AROUND LIKE THAT!?” asked Sarah to herself. “I FUCKING SLICED HER OPEN! HOW CAN SHE NOT BE IN PAIN!?”.
The brutal and bloody training method of the Lothian has made Cobra able to tolerate and withstand a lot of pain. After years of Torturous training and punishment she can take allot more than Sarah. She was still in SERVERE pain from her wounds and her guts hanging out of her stomach but she is able to fight through it much better than Sarah.

“Now I haven’t finished telling you about my training yet.” Cobra said
“SHIT NO! NOT AGAIN!” thought Sarah. She knew that she couldn’t take any more of these methods. She tried to crawl away on her back with her good arm, but Cobra just laughed at her.

“ Step 2: When you opponent is finally grounded then aim for there chest.”

Cobra Stood beside a desperate Sarah. They looked into each other’s eyes as Sarah continued to pull her self back. She was still spitting blood and bits of smashed teeth.
Cobra then jumped in the air so she was directly above Sarah. Her pointed knees downwards and Cobra bombed straight down onto Sarah’s ribcage, shattering them and causing shards to puncture Sarah’s internal organs and poke through her skin. Exposing some of them.
“NARGGHHH ARRRGHHHH DAARRRGGGHHH CARGGHHA” Screamed Sarah in excruciating pain. She thrashed wildly on the floor like a fish out of water. She vomited violently as the thick liquid shot out of her mouth and nose into the air above. It landed back on her and Cobra who was rested on top of Sarah with her knees dug into her body. They created a dent in her chest due to the shattered ribs not being there to support her weight. Cobra resting on top of Sarah made things even more painful and uncomfortable for her as she tried to push her off, but she was in too much pain.

“Fuck....she broke....my ribs....my ribs...” Sarah thought to herself while she choked up blood and vomit. Sarah couldn’t believe she was experiencing this. Her ribs had been shattered, her skull was smashed, her back torn, her lung punctured and her right arm was shredded to bits. Furthermore she was defenceless. Her knife was several meters away, and right now she was going nowhere.
She wanted the pain to go away but at the back of her mind she thought about her mission. She needed to carry on; the survival of the whole universe was on her. She could not fail.

“I need....to get her off me” She thought as she raised her left arm. She grabbed one of cobras hanging intestines, pulling them out and spilling coils of intestines, blood and other bodily fluids to spill all over her.
“ARGHHH! YOU BITCH!” Screamed Cobra as Sarah pushed her hand deeper in Cobras stomach, making Cobra shake and twitch in discomfort at the feeling of a hand inside her.
“NNNNAARGGGHHH FUCK!” Cobra moaned.
“yes I think It’s working” Thought Sarah to herself. She removed her hand out of Cobra and revealed a fist full of bloody slimy intestines. They squelched and squiged as she let them slide out of her hand onto her chest with a slimy “splat”

“CAGHGH! YOU FUCKING BITCH” screamed Cobra as she held her stomach trying to stop more from spilling out. But she didn’t move off Sarah’s chest. Instead she positioned herself as if she was setting up for something.
“NNNGGHH GET OFF ME!” thought Sarah. Every move Cobra made on her broken chest caused her pain. She raised her arm to Cobras wound again to grab more of her guts but Cobra was not going to allow that.
Cobra grabbed her arm and threw it back down to the ground “NOT THIS TIME!” she screamed at Sarah as she raised her knife and impaled her hand to the ground. Blood spurted from it as the blade tore through her hand and into the ground below, causing Sarah to be completely defenceless.
“DARRGGHHHH! SHIT!” Sarah screamed.

“That should keep you from messing around” said Cobra.
She finally got up off Sarah’s chest as shards of her ribs shuffled and moved around in her body, taking up the now free space that was occupied by Cobras knees. She began to walk towards Sarah’s knife with was a few meters away. Her dangling intestines were now rubbing the floor, tagging along behind her as she walked, leaving a trail of blood, bile and other fluids which made her walk with a slight limp.
“I’m so going to make her suffer for this” She thought as she looked down at her dangling guts, limping as she walked and covering her wound to stop them from slipping out further.
But Sarah was too concerned about her hand to notice she had gone. She knew she had to move out of this position before “step 3”. She tried to use her other arm to remove the blade but it just continued to flop around when she raised it by her shoulder, and the pain was too much.
“Fuck...no....NO!” She thought as she began to panic.

Cobra took Sarah’s knife and walked back towards her. She was bleeding heavily from the stomach and her left hand covered and held some of her guts. She sat on Sarah’s belly and placed her knees beside her on the ground so she was completely over her and moved her hand, causing her exposed guts to fall and spill over Sarah’s belly.

“Step 3” she said while she ripped Sarah’s top with her knife. Exposing her breasts and perky nipples.

Sarah looked in fear. She knew what was coming next. “NO NO! NOOO!” She screamed thrashing wildly in her attempt to escape.

“Now this step depends completely on weather the opponent is a male or female. And your in luck....your a female” She taunted.

“Now eeny meeny miny mo” Said Cobra and she pointed her blade at the two tits in beat with the song. Sarah was shaking hysterically at the thought of losing her tits. She gasped every time the blade drew close to them.
“God no....please no...” she thought, as Cobra ran her knife slowly over her tit, leaving a small red graze which then started to trickle with blood. Sarah was too weak to fight back. Her body was in too much pain. All she could do was just watch in shock.
Cobra finally made a decision. “I think I’ll go for the left one first” she informed Sarah who was trembling in fear.“Don’t worry. I’ll make it nice and slow for you so you feel every little thing.” Cobra said with an evil grin on her face.
She then grabbed Sarah’s left tit and stabbed it right in between the nipple. Squirting blood over her black body suit and face.
“GACH!! ORRGH SHIT ARRKKKHH!” Moaned Sarah in pain. He eyes were wide open as she watched Cobra push her knife deeper and deeper into her delicate and sensitive tit. Tearing through her glands and fatty tissue. Completely destroying it.
Cobra drove it further and further downwards, making sure she cut straight through every nerve and sensitive area of her tit, causing the maximum amount of pain possible.

Sarah was shaking and crying. The pain she was going through was massive. The most sensitive areas of her body had just been impaled.
“AHHHHHHGGGHHHHHHHHNNNNOOOOOAAAHHHHHHGGGGGGG” she screamed while twitching and arching her body. Cobra continued to push the blade further and further as blood squirted over her face, but Cobra didn’t mind, she enjoyed it. She loved being drenched in the blood of her enemies...especially if they are female. She laughed manically as she pushed the blade deeper and deeper and deeper into Sarah’s massive DD’s

Sarah felt the blade travel deeper and deeper into her tit as she tried to struggle away from Cobras grasp. With no ribs there to protect her vital organs the knife easily tore through her pectoral muscles and poked at the already punctured lung. Sarah twitched and shook in pain at the feeling of the sharp tip rubbing and scraping against it.
“ARRRGHHH NO NOT AGAIN” She thought as blood began to fill her throat.
Cobra then stopped and looked in Sarah’s broken face. She saw fear. The type of fear that cobra enjoyed the most. The fear of being helpless and vulnerable. The feeling of having the power to control the last moments of someone’s life exited her deeply.
Likewise Sarah Looked in cobras eyes. She saw enjoyment, hate, and evil.

Cobra tightened her grip on the knife and placed two hands on it, preparing for one final push.

Everything stopped and went quiet as they looked at each other. Thoughts entering there minds.
“I...can’t let her .....kill me.....Must finish the mission....at....any costs” Thought Sarah as blood and tissue continued to pour and squirt for her mutilated tit.
“I’m going to make her last moments living hell” Thought Cobra as she bent down, placing her face next to Sarah’s ear.
She said softly “Don’t worry....this will only hurt allot”. She then forcefully, with one large powerful push, she violently drove her blade into Sarah. Tearing past her lung and back muscles and coming out of her back. Pinning her to the ground yet again.

Sarah jerked her head as the blade drove into her body. As her head rose she spat pints of blood in the air all over both of them.
“GAGHHHHHHHH! RRRNNNNNNGGGGGGG!” She screamed in excruciating pain. Blood was squirting out of her chest and back. Making a large bloody puddle on the ground. Blood mixed with the yellow fatty tissue from her tit making a horrible orangey-yellow substance that poured from her mutilated tit and onto her body.
She began twitching and spazing as she struggled to breath. The lung had already been stabbed earlier, and blood was filing it even more now.
But that was not what cobra intentionally had in mind. It wasn’t over yet.
She removed the two knifes from Sarah’s hand and chest and stood up. Sarah just laid there Twitching, shaking, struggling to breath and gagging on blood which she still was coughing up. Cobra picked her up by the her blood soaked hair and threw her against a rocky wall, pinning her yet again.

“Now this isn’t really part of the steps I learnt. I just feel like fucking around with you hahaha” Said Cobra as she held Sarah against the wall.
“I haven’t finished with your tit yet by the way” she said softly to Sarah.
“No....not again...not my tit...” Sarah thought as the shook and trembled at thoughts of what Cobra will do. Cobra grabbed Sarah’s tit. She dug her thumbs into the stab wound and rested her fingers on the side of her tit making a sturdy grip. Sarah jerked around trying to save her breats and to escape, but her attempts were weak.
“hahahaha I hope you’re ready for this!” shouted Cobra as she Began to slowly pull apart her wounded tit.
“AAAAAARRRRNNNNNGGHHHH!!!!” Screamed Sarah as she grit her teeth in pain.
Her skin surrounding the tit stretched and tore like a plastic bag as her tit began to separate in 2 halves from the nipple. Large amounts of fatty tissue that shaped and made her breast what they were squeezed and oozed out all over cobras hands and splattered on the ground as she tore the last few parts of her connecting skin off, Spraying blood over the already heavily drenched girls and exposing Sarah’s mammary glands and pectoral muscles.

She had been completely debreasted.

“GHHHHHHAAAAAAAAGHHHHHHHHH ARRRGHHHHHHH NNNOOOOOO DARGGHHHHHHHHH!!” Screamed Sarah in shock and pain as she fell to the floor rolling around in pools of blood fat while holding what used to be her massive breast.
She looked down at herself and fixed her wide teary eyes on her exposed mammary gland and pectoral muscle. She just stared...without saying a word.
“Shit....She just....she just.....tore off my tit...” thought Sarah to herself as she held her wound and hugged her wounded body while crouching on her knees.
She looked up at Cobra who was playing with the two half’s of her breast.
“YOU SICK BITCH!” Sarah screamed at Cobra while still spitting blood and vomit.

Cobra held the Large jggly halves in her hands and rubbed them against her body, turning her on and getting her wet again. Blood and fatty tissue smeared over her black body suit and covered her dangling intestines with chunks of fat and skin.
Sarah looked at her in disgust. Watching her play with her beautiful breasts made her sick to her stomach. She threw up a second time on the floor, bringing up blood and vomit in a horrible mixture.
Cobra walked over to Sarah and grabbed her by the hair, forcing her to look up. Her mouth was smeared with vomit and her face blooded and bruised. Her hair was a mess as strands of it stuck to her sticky bloody face, blocking some of Sarah’s vision as they covered her eyes.
Cobra raised and squeezed the two halves over Sarah’s face ,oozing blood and fat in her eyes nose and mouth. Sarah felt humiliated.
The once full, jiggly and plump pieces of her breast were no nothing more than just floppy pieces of skin. The tissue that gave it shape and structure was smeared over Sarah as Cobra rubbed her severed tits over her face, leaving Sarah in disgust.
Finally she stuffed one of the thin, flat, floppy pieces of her tit in Sarah’s mouth and stuffed it down her throat. Sarah Gagged and shook at the taste and thought of eating her own tit. The remainder of blood and fatty tissue filled her mouth as Cobra forced her hand down her throat, making Sarah spew vomit from her nose and mouth yet again.
Sarah’s neck bulged and made room for Cobras hand. Sarah tried to bite down but her teeth were either knocked out, broken or loose from that devastating kick to the head earlier on, so it just caused more pain and discomfort for her.
“BLEGH AKG GAGH” Gagged Sarah as tears streamed downs her face and vomit poured out of her mouth while cobra forced her hand down her throat further and further until she could poke her finger tips thorough Sarah’s ribless chest, making it bulge and rise.

Finally cobra removed her arm from Sarah’s throat, making sure she left her severed tit inside her.

“That was fun!” said Cobra as she smiled manically.
Sarah just best over on the ground coughing and gagging. She could feel her tit inside of her chest moving around with her breathing.
“This is.....not....good.” she thought as she vomited again at the taste and thought of her shredded tit inside her.

“now let’s get started on that other one.” Said cobra menacingly to Sarah.
“Shit....shit....no...NO PLEASE” though Sarah. She didn’t want Cobra to know she was scared, But she was terrified.
She didn’t want to go through any more torture but she knew she had to do something. She couldn’t let Cobra get what was in that cave
“Wow...us super soldiers can really take a lot cant we” said Cobra as she bent down to talk to Sarah. “I mean look at us. I’m here with my intestines dangling on the floor, gashes to my chest, deep stabs and yet here I am still alive! And you! You are something else you are! Your arms fucked, your backs torn, ribs smashed, face fractured and i just violently tore off your tit. But you’re STILL alive! Any normal human would have dies ages ago huh?”
“How could she be so brutal..so sick” thought Sarah, as she held her body in excruciating pain.
“Hmmmm what should I do with this tit then?...I could skin it....I could slice it in to thin wafer pieces....i could slice it of slowly....soooo many options to choose from hahaha.” Said cobra to Sarah.
Cobras words filled Sarah with fear. She struggled to escape And began to pull herself along the ground towards the water fall as Cobra slowly approached her.
It was time for Sarah to act. She knew if she didn’t do something fast then she will die. She looked around franticly for something and noticed the waterfall behind her.

On the planet Norion, waterfalls always have a bog/swamp like area at the bottom. They are very dangerous with Tar pits, Giant Insects and carnivorous plants that eat almost anything. Sarah knew she couldn’t beat Cobra in her current state and no one, super solider of not would be able to survive a Norion swam attack.
Cobra continued to walk with her arms stretched out holding the 2 knifes. Her intestines continued to fall out of her stomach and several meters of them hung from her stomach and dragged behind her. But she didn’t care anymore. She just wanted to torture Sarah more and more.

Sarah observed cobras dangling intestines and came up with an idea. She braced herself and opened her bloddied right hand.
“DIE BITCH!” screamed Cobra as she crossed her swords like a pair of scissors aimed directly at Sarah’s neck in an attempt to behead her. At exactly the same time Sarah trusted her wounded arm forward as she screamed at the pain it caused her. She didn’t want to risk using her left arm as it’s the only defence she had against Cobra.
She still had control over her hand and attempted to grab Cobras intestines again in an attempt to pull her down the waterfall.
But Sarah didn’t predict Cobras scissor like attack and put her hand directly between where the 2 blades met, resulting in her index, middle and fore finger getting sliced off completely.
“ARGHHH GAGHH” Screamed Sarah in excruciating pain as she watched her fingers fall down the water fall below. Blood spurted from the bloody stumps and her hand shook in pain.

“YOU IDIOT! HAHAHAHA your just making things so much more easier for me” Cobra laughed. She rose the two knifes again and laughed manically and she crossed them again aimed at Sarah’s neck.
This time Sarah anticipated it and successfully ducked out of its way.

“GO TO HELL BITCH!” Screamed Sarah as she stuck her left hand in Cobras stomach and Grabbed whatever she could with a tight grip.
“GAGHHHH WHAT ARE YOU DOING!?” Screamed Cobra.
“DIE!” Screamed Sarah a the top of her lungs as she slowly pulled back on Cobra lifting her over her crouched body and sending her on her way to the swamp below.
“NO!” Cobra screamed as she was slowly lifted over. “IF IM GOING THEN IM TAKING YOU WITH ME!” she screamed.
In a last ditch attempt to kill Sarah , Cobra Dived her hands into her stomach and pulled out a strand of her slimy intestines. “GAGHNN” She moaned as she pulled quickly pulled them out squirting blood and bodily fluids from her stomach. Just as her head passed Sarah’s She wrapped her intestines around her neck and face, Strangling her and binding her mouth and nose
“WHAT THE FUCK! SHIT! NO mffffggghhhgh” Her cries of shock were interrupted by Cobra as her intestines covered and surrounded her mouth.
“MMMMFFFGGGHHHMMMFGGHHMM” Cried Sarah as her screams were muffled.
“I’ll See you in hell” whispered Cobra in Sarah’s ear as she passed her. Cobra fell down the waterfall cackling like a maniac while she let her intestines dangle freely and straighten in the air as she fell.
Sarah knew what was going to happen next.

She felt cobras intestines pulling on her face and neck as she began to tip over the waterfall with Cobra.
“MMMGGGNMMMMMMMGGHGHHHH NMMMMNGGHH MMMMNNDDGHH!!!!!” She tried to scream but having cobras intestines in her mouth just caused small muffles and murmurs. Her eyes widened as Cobras intestines finally caught up with her and violently pulled her backwards down into the swamp following Cobra, like they were attached to each other by a rope. “MGMMMMMHHGHGHNMM!” she continued with her pitiful screams as she fell downwards into the dark swam.



Part 5 coming soon.

Jesus this is good :P MORE!

I'm loving this. I hope Sarah gets her Arm eaten or torn off or something. I love amuptations.

Hopefully there not dead after that fall.

Of course not! i plan to have another 3-4 parts lol. And if you like amputations then your gona love the next part. The things I have in mind are amazing.

Part 5

Sarah struggle in the swamp.

Sarah slowly opened her eyes and raised her head off the muddy swamp floor. She moaned in pain and spat blood as her body throbbed from the hard fast impact of her fall. She looked around her environment and realised where she was.
“Shit...I got to get out of here now” she thought while pushing her self up with her arms. She forgot that her right arm was heavily injured as it gave way to her weight. Bending to the side as she collapsed and fell on the ground again.
“AGHHHH FUCK!” she screamed in pain. “My arm...i forgot” she thought as she used her knees and left hand to push herself up.
She began to slowly walk through the swamp with a slight limp. Dragging her body to continue and find a way back to the top. She knew it was going to be hard getting out of here as she fell over 600m. Getting back to the top would be almost impossible.
But Sarah was determined; she had never failed a mission and she would not give up no matter what, especially since the whole universe could be in danger.
“I have to get back to the top” she thought as she looked up high. The sun was beginning to set as it crossed over the swamp, giving her enough light to find her way around. But she had to hurry, it was fast approaching night time and the swamp was becoming darker.
In a stroke of luck she came across her knife which was embedded in the ground. She went over and picked it up as a flood of relief came over her. “Cobra must have dropped this as she fell...At least I have some form of defence now” she thought as she clutched the handle in her left hand and began walking again.

As she continued she scanned her body. Her back still bled quite heavily from Cobra’s knife attack and caused Sarah a strong painful stinging sensation every time she arched or bent her back. Her arm, now missing 3 fingers dangled beside her dripping blood and flesh. It caused her pain everytime it tapped against her body or other objects meaning it was no use to her any more.
But she still tried to keep it from separating from her body as she could always repair it in the healing chamber back a HQ. Of course this would leave a great permanent scar which would always remind her of this event.
Bits and pieces of her ribs tore and poked through her skin, making breathing a painful chore. Every time she took a breath she felt sharp shards of her ribs rip and tear her lungs and skin. She grit her teeth through the pain as she knew she couldn’t do anything about it right now.
She looked at and held her tit less chest as tears began to form in her eyes. “ I can’t believe she did this” Sarah thought as she looked down at her titless wound clutching the flat remains of her glands and mushy fat tissue.
Her face throbbed in pain as she then held it. It was fractured in many places making speaking and facial gestures a painful thing. She then placed her hands round her throat and grabbed Cobras intestines that were still wrapped around her neck and threw them to the floor.

She continued walking around as she looked up. The sun was getting lower and lower as it began to cast small shadows on the soft marshy ground from the ugly swamp trees. “Shit I need to hurry” she thought as she looked around for that one route of escape.

Sarah looked ahead of her as she walked. She brushed past soggy branches, vines and poisonous plants, finally stopping as she approached a large tar pit.
Steam and bubbles of gas rose to the surface of the thick, black liquid and popped, making a sick “squelchy” noise. Sarah looked across the other side of the black lake and saw a rocky wall in the distance. It had many holes and small caves on its face making it suitable for climbing. Sarah figured that that was probably her best chance to get out of here.
She began to walk through the tar. It seemed thicker than she expected as she struggled through the thick black liquid. It was warm like a Jacuzzi and the sticky, gooey tar soaked through her trousers and panties and stuck to her skin as strands of it it dangled and stretched like melted cheese from her body
It completely overwhelmed her as her movements became slower and it became harder to move around.
The thick tar had her trapped.

She managed to get to the centre of the tar pit before it managed to trap her. She struggled and thrashed around as she tried desperately to escape. Her now black, sticky hair swung around and stuck to her bloodied face and her remaining tit jiggled around as it became engulfed in the warm black goo.
It was no use struggling as it just made things worse. She was now up to her waist in tar. Her body and face was covered in the thick black liquid as it splashed and landed on her face, entering her mouth and blinding her every now and then.
“ARGHHHHHH NOOO!” Sarah screamed as she realised she was stuck. She was slowly sinking into the thick tar.

Suddenly 3 large bubbles slowly rose from the tar pit. One behind her, one to her left and one to her right. Sarah didn’t realy take no notice of them as she continued her pathetic struggles to escape.
The bubbles grew bigger and bigger and bigger until Sarah stopped struggling around and suddenly froze. Fear shot through her like a lighting bold as she looked up realising what was surrounding her.
They weren’t bubbles...They were giant leeches.

Sarah’s eyes widened in fear as they slowly emerged. There slimy black bodies towered over Sarah as they opened there tube like mouths and came closer to Sarah. There holes opened wide as Sarah stared down into it. Many large, sharp teeth stuck out on the walls of the leech’s insides, pointing inwards towards the centre.
Sarah looked in fear as she knew she was in DEEP trouble. “AHHHGGHHH SHIT NOOOO!” she thought to herself as the leeches opened wide and prepared to eat Sarah. She clutched her knife tightly as she darted her eyes between the 3 leeches, hoping to somehow kill them before they killed her.

The leeches screeched, signalling they were about to attack. Sarah screamed in fear as the one to her left engulfed her arm up to the shoulder, swallowing it down its body and chewing on it with its many sharp teeth. Blood spurted out of the leeches mouth and over Sarah as she screamed in pain at her arm being chewed on.
The other leech to her right followed and engulfed her right arm.
“AGHHHHHHNNNN NO NO NO!!!” Sarah cried out as it bit and chewed and shredded her already battered right arm.
She was pinned. Her body was up right and deep in thick tar. Her arms out stretched and being eaten by the 2 leeches. Sarah cried in despair as blood sprayed over her and the leeches as they tore through her arms and bit off chunks of flesh and muscle and drank her splurting blood.

Sarah Felt her right arm being slowly pulled away from her as the leech bit down again. She grit her teeth and looked over to the leech on her right arm. “no...No....NOOOO! “ She screamed as she realised it was about to tear.
Finally the leech chewed through her elbow joint and tore it off completely with a sickening “POPCRRRAKK”, spraying lots of blood from its mouth over her body.
“DARRRGGHHHHHH ARRGHHHHGGN RAGHHHHH!” she screamed in pain the lower half of her arm was violently torn off and eaten. She watched with terror and fear in her eyes as her arm travelled slowly down the leech as a large lump which disappeared deep down into the tar.

“ARGGHHH FUCK!” She screamed as she desperately tried to escape. The leech was still attached to her right arm as it now began working on her shoulder joint. It tore her skin at the shoulder and bit its teeth down, tearing past her muscle and digging its teeth between the ball and socket joint.
Sarah screamed wildly as its teeth bit down into her shoulder joint and tore through her catalige, ligaments and tendons. The leech pulled Sarah’s upper arm as it attempted to remove and eat it making Sarah grit her teeth and whine. “POP” went Sarah’s right shoulder as it dislocated.
“GARGHH NO ARGHHH” screamed Sarah in excruciating pain at the dislocation as the leech prepared its self for one last pull. It gripped down on the remainder of Sarah’s am hard, digging its many sharp teeth down into it.
Sarah could do nothing but watch as the upper part of her arm tore away with the leech as blood gushed and squirted over Sarah with the gory removal.
“BWAGHHHH ARGHHHH DARGGGHHHH!MY ARM!” screamed Sarah as the rest of her arm ripped from her body. The leech moved back slightly from her body and chewed Sarah’s amputated arm. Sarah shook and trembled in pain as she stared directly at the leech. She looked down its mouth and watched with grit teeth as it ate and chewed her arm, swallowing it to be digested. It then slowly sank into the tar pit as it was satisfied.

Blood spurted from her fresh stump as she screamed in terrible agony. She turned her head to her left and watched the other leech make a meal of her left arm. It bit its sharp teeth into Sarah’s soft and tender muscle and ate chunks of her flesh.
“NARRGGGG!” she screamed as blood dribbled from its mouth.
“NO NO! IM NOT LOOSING MY OTHER ONE!” she thought to herself. She still held onto her knife even thought her whole arm was engulfed by the leech.
She gripped it tight and then drove it straight through the top of the leech, tearing a line straight down the middle of it.
The leech shook and screeched in pain as it loosened its grip and fled back into the tar. Sarah’s arm slid of its mouth with strands of blood and leech saliva. It was still intact but covered in bite marks. Chunks of it had been torn off too which made Sarah cry in pain, but she could still move and use it to an extent.

The 3rd leech was left. Sarah turned her head to find it engulfing the whole top half of her body.
“SHIT ARRRGHHH NO!” she screamed as the leech engulfed her. It bit down hard onto her body and picked her up, successfully removing her from the tar but dangling her in the air at the same time.
Sarah’s screams were muffled as she struggled in the body of the leech. Its many teeth dug and tore at her body as it bit down again and again and again. Its inside filled with Sarah’s blood as it poured out from the leeches mouth , drenching her tar covered legs in it.
“MGGHHMMGHHG FHNEGHH MGH!” muffled Sarah as she cried from her flesh tearing and ripping.
She Grabbed hold of her knife firmly again and stabbed the leech from the inside and tore a line down wards, making her head stick out of its torn body. She gasped for air as she poked her head out and screamed as the leech bit its sharp teeth harder into her. Blood squirted out of the tear and past Sarah.

Suddenly another leech emerged from the tar.

“FUCK NO NO NO! ARHGHH!” Sarah screamed as she spotted it. It helped the other leech and engulfed her lower half which stuck out of the first leech’s mouth. Its teeth tore through Sarah’s legs and sliced open her belly as it ate away at her intestines
“AKHG SHIT....MY STOMACH....MY GUTS! ARRGHHH NARRGRHH I CAN FEEL IT EATING THEM!”. Thought Sarah as she felt them spill and tangle around in the leeches teeth, she could actually feel the leeches teeth pulling and biting her guts. She watched them both eat her as she screamed in agony.
The leeches began to pull Sarah apart. Sarah’s eyes were still locked onto the gory scene as she saw her skin tear and rip around her waist as they both attempted to pull Sarah in half.

“I HAVE TO GET OUT OF HERE!” she thought to herself as she felt severe pain. She tore through the leech with her knife one more as it screeched. It loosened and let go of Sarah, fleeing back into the tar. Sarah gasped again as she was free. She was covered in bite marks and blood. Leech saliva dangled from her top half and her hair now was messy and free as the leech managed to remove band that kept her hair tied.
She looked down at the last leech that engulfed her from just under her tit. It straightened itself making Sarah upright as it continued to chew and rip through Sarah’s body. She screamed in pain while stabbing it again and again with her knife.
The leech seemed to ignore her and still continued to shred and tear Sarah’s body making her blood and its saliva spray upwards onto Sarah’s messy face as it ate her lower half
“NO I CANT LET IT EAT ME!” she thought as she screamed in pain and discomfort. She felt the leech bite into her less and ass and stomach and she screamed in agony at it tearing open her stomach and biting down on her intestines and other organs.
“GARGHHHHHH!” She screamed again as it squeezed her. She stabbed the leech over and over again in desperation but this one wouldn’t give up. It ate away at the intestines like spaghetti and tried to tear off her legs

Sarah grit her teeth through immense pain and looked up. The leech lifted her high enough to reach a long horizontal vine that grew from one tree to another either side of the tar pit. She knew this would be her way across.
She placed her knife in her mouth and reached up in desperation with her only bloody arm, stretching desperately and crying as the leech bit and chewed her organs. It clamped down hard on her body and drank the blood that squirted out of her, while Sarah grunted and tried her best to fight through the pain.
She grabbed the vine and pulled her self up with all her might. The teeth tore downwards in her body as she pulled. “ANNNGHH” She screamed as she felt her back, legs and stomach tear open even more while the leech tightened its grip on her making it much more painful as more blood squirted from its mouth.

Finally she yanked herself out of its mouth with a gush of blood and guts as she looked down into the leeches open mouth. She watched it munch away at her intestines, skin and muscle as she cried in agony. It finally sank back down into the bog and left.
Sarah then used the vine to zip line it to the other side of the tar pit. Landing safe on the other side.

She dropped to the floor on her knees and held her armless stump as blood squirted out of it. It was completely torn off by the shoulder joint and all that was left was bits of loose skin, dangling tendons and ligaments.
“My....arm.....it just ate....my arm” she thought as she held it.
Her body looked like it went through a blender as she was covered in large teeth marks and gashes. Her leg muscles were torn and even exposed her bones to the world as blood dripped and poured from them. Her remaining arm looked like it had been skinned. There were so many gashes and cuts on it that it just looked like a piece of bloody meat. Sarah could still move it fine, but it just constantly gave her a painful stinging sensation.
Her other breast had many gashes and bites on them which exposed her glands and spewed with blood and fatty tissue. Overall it was still intact which relieved Sarah as she didn’t want to lose her last tit.
Her face had small cuts on her cheeks and fore head with bled quite heavily. It was covered in blood, tar and leech saliva which hung from her chin and face. Her hair was now completely strayed over her face as strands stuck to it. It was wet with the leech saliva which made it sticky and clump together in small groups as it brushed past her shoulder. Her band which kept it neat in a pony tail was gone making her hair go wild.
“nnggggg....my body...it hurts...” she thought to herself as she assessed her guts and bites.
Her intestines dangled from her stomach as she watched them slip out of her open wound. The leech manger to tear open her stomach eat some of them, exposed her large and small intestines as they both spilled and slowly slid from her stomach onto the marshy ground. She grabbed them and trembled as she felt her hand on them.
“GAGH...it ate my...intestines....my intestines.” She thought to herself as more of her large intestine slid and squelched out of her stomach and on to the wet ground beneath her with a splat, mixing in with the blood, tar, bile and leech saliva that collected on the ground.
She raised her head to the sky as the sun slowly set and screamed at the top of her lungs in agony as she held her bloody stump with her intestines spilled on the floor.

“I’ve got to get out of here” she thought as she collected her intestines in her arm and stood up. Her body was in agony but she walked forward, with a heavy limp towards her escape.

Very good. Cant wait for the next part. :-)

Ooo this is good :3 More!

This is hot.

been quite busy guys. So next part will be here soon

come on man! Where's part 6! It's been ages! I'm dying to know what happens next!

been realy ill with chicken pox belief it or not. So it's gona take a while more. But I've had time to think so this next part is gona be realy good. Just wait a liiiiiiiitle longer please. Thanks ;)

ok, just to let you all know I'm still alive and planing to continue this. I'm better now.

Aaasanyways.....time to get started on the next part

It's been almost a month since any word on this. Anything new?

>>31

You won't BELIVE how busy I've been man. I have the ideas and stuf but I just have not had the time man. All I need to do is write it up.

I'm on a break all next week tho, so expect it sometime then.

Good to know peeople still want to see it tho, I thought people began to loose interest lol.

I've got ideas for another story aswell, but there's still 2 more parts to this one, so my ideas will have to wait for now....

FOR YAY! \o/ More Knife Fight Soon (tm)

Part 6

Cobra’s past torture.

Cobra slowly opened her eyes and looked around as she rose to her feet.
“Where the hell am I?” she thought to herself while scanning her eyes through the dark humid swamp .
She held her side and stomach as they bled and throbbed with pain and cradled her wounded body. With comfort. She closed her eyes and tried to remember the events that took place earlier.
“I fell from all the way up there” she thought to herself looking up and spotting the ledge she and Sarah brutally fought upon.
“I hope that bitch is dead!” she muttered under her breath while looking around for a way back up to get the artefact.

Cobra had no ideas of the dangers in the swamp. She was unfamiliar with this planet and the beasts that roamed at night looking for prey. Of course Sarah knew this and it was all part of her plan to kill Cobra, which happened to backfire and send her to her own demise.
“Im NOT failing another mission!” Cobra thought as she began to walk through the swamp. Failing this mission would leave her with a brutal punishment from the Lothian which she had already experienced...

This brutal punishment consisted of getting stripped naked at a stadium and tied with rope around her hands hanging from a bar just above her. Her feet just managed to touch the ground as her arms were stretched above her from the rope . Then in front of a large crowd of Lothian members (usually men) and then flogged 500 times across the body with clawwhips.
Clawwhips are a special weapon designed by the Lothian to torture there victim in some of the most painful ways. They are just like normal whips, but the end splits into 3 separate whips and each of them have a very sharp hook at the tip, resembling a claw.
Cobra HATED them. She could remember how they painfully punctured deep into her flesh, shredding her body to pieces and drenching her in her blood.
Even worse they would sometimes get stuck in her flesh, causing the torturer to forcefully pull down or across to release it. This made the claws tear and rip long, deep gashes across her beautiful body.
The pain was untolerable, and because she was a super solider this brutality lasted for all most 2 days.
The torturer particularly liked it when the claws became stuck and made sure to pull with all his might for the maximum amount of pain. He had a sort of signature move as well that struck fear into Cobra. He would spread her legs open and stand behind her. Then he would place the clawwhip behind him and bring it forward in an upwards motion with blinding speed. With her legs open, the claw whip went between her spread legs and curled upwards, casing the claws to painfully embed itself deep into her chest just above her large tits and latch into her ribcage, locking and becoming stuck. Then the executioner would place his foot on her back and forcefully pull on the clawwhip, causing it to break the ribs it was attached to and tear downwards into her body like a garden rake. The two claws on the sides split both of her tits in half as it quickly tore down her body, and they each left 3 open wounds on her stomach as it tore through her abs, spilling her intestines and internal organs for the first time.
But worst of all it tore the delicate flesh of her pussy away as it curled under and brought with it her clit and folds of her delicate pussy lips.
Cobra could remember throwing up and screaming for mercy at that time. That one move broke her completely. Just thinking about that happening again sent fear and shivers down her body.

As this brutal punishment ended Cobra fell to the floor and laid facedown in pools of her blood, intestines, Fatty tissue from her breast and chunks of flesh and muscle that tore away from her body. She lost over 98% of her blood that day and even a minute longer would have killed her.
Then everything went black.
Cobra then remembered waking up in the Lothian healing chamber. She was placed in a tank of green liquid which numbed her body as mechanical arms repaired her. Relief over came her as she knew the most painful part of her torture was over. But as soon as she was fully repaired the next part of her torture would begin.
For the last phase of her torture she was to be raped by each male member of The Lothian who volunteered to do so. Of course with her beautiful looks and perfect body she was favoured among the thousands of males in the Lothian, so over 1500 of them agreed to do so.
She was lead underground at the Lothian headquarters to a large cell. The cell was completely empty aside from the lights at the top that were always on, and the 4 cameras in the corners of the room. She was stripped naked again and left in there for a while on her own.
She was locked in prison and raped as the many males of the Lothian came one there own or in large groups for a gangbang.
She could remember how this ordeal went on for just over a week due to the large number of males in the Lothian. She was fucked over 200 times every day.
And to make things worse, the men were allowed to do whatever they wanted with her. Some fucked her in her ass, some decided to cum inside her, some brutally face fucked her, some teamed up and horribly gangbanged her , and some even just punched, kicked and beat the shit out of her. By the time the ordeal was over she had been raped over 2000 times.
Cobra could remember how she didn’t even get a chance to rest. As soon as one raped her, another one came in. For a whole week she didn’t sleep or eat anything apart from cum.

About half way through the torture, an alien member of the Lothian came in for his turn. His cock was over 16 inches long and 7 inches in width. Her eyes widened with fear and he grabbed her legs with his massive arms and spread them.
At 11 ft he towered over Cobra and held her legs as if they were drumsticks. He placed her pussy on his massive cock and pulled down on her legs towards his body, forcing his massive penis into Cobras sore and tight pussy.
Cobras eyes widened and her mouth opened in shock as she felt herself slowly slide down onto his penis. Her stomach began to bulge from the immense size and the aliens penis slowly reached further and further and deeper and deeper into her pussy. The aliens Cock finally managed to get the head of his penis in at least and began moving cobra up and down on it. He grabbed Cobra in the palm of his hand and jerked her up and down on his cock as if he was wanking.
Cobra couldn’t even scream. The pain she experienced was incredible. Her cervix was tearing away to make room for his massive cock and blood dripped form her vagina. Every time he forced her down his penis tore thought her just that little bit more.

Finally he came in her and shot over 5 pints of alien sperm inside her. She felt the warm brown, sticky goo fill her vagina to the brim and seep into her body from the tear his penis made to her cervix. His sperm splashed and squirted over her intestines and other internal organs, making cobra squirm and shudder in discomfort as she felt it slosh around in her stomach.
He threw her off his penis like a used condom and left satisfied. Cobra laid there with wide eyes and a open mouth in shock and pain, chocking up a bit of the aliens sperm that will forever be trapped inside her body.

Broken and humiliated she laid down in the brown goo as it flowed back out of her red and sore vagina.

Then the door opened again with more Lothian members.
“I can’t let that happen again!” she thought as her heart started to race faster. She looked up high. The sun was beginning to set and the predators were preparing to come out for their prey. But this was all oblivious to Cobra as she continued into the heart of the swamp.
She held herself as she walked. Her black body suit was torn and ripped from Sarah’s knife, revealing her many slashed and deep knife wounds to her stomach and side. Her tits were almost exposed as the leather material from under her tits was torn away, revealing a nice underboob view to accompany her tight cleavage.
She placed her hand over her stomach to try and keep her intestines and other organs in her as they poked and spilled thought her stomach wounds and slid through the gaps of her fingers. Strands of her intestines also trailed behind her dragging on the floor as she walked. But none of that mattered to her now. She had to get out of here at all costs or face the consequences.
Night time was fast approaching. Cobra continued to look around for an escape as she cut down branches, plants and vines that got in her way.
“Come on! There has to be some way out of here!” She thought to herself in frustration. After what felt like hours walking around Cobra finally came across a rocky wall. It had large holes in it that would make it suitable for climbing to the top and.
A flood of relief came across Cobra as she walked up to the wall and prepared to climb it.
She looked up the high rock face. It was over 600m in height and getting to the top would take time and allot of strength.
“This should be easy” Cobra thought as a smile came across her face. She grabbed on of the holes and slowly pulled herself up.
“Almost half way” she thought to herself as she continued on. Her intestines began to dangle and hang from her gaping wounds as she climbed, she felt the rocky wall rub against them as she climbed, making her shake and squirm in discomfort, but for the most part she ignored it and carried on. She needed to get that artefact at all costs.

She came to one of the holes and stopped.
“Something’s not right here” she thought. She stared straight forward into the hole and paused for a moment...as if there was something in there waiting to come out.
“meh....it’s just me” Cobra thought as she carried on past the hole.
Suddenly just as her head passed the top and her body was in line with the hole, a large scythe like claw burst out from it and impaled Cobra straight through the stomach, Knocking her off the wall and dangling her in mid air.
“BWAGH!!” went cobra spitting blood as the claw drove straight through her stomach and out her back. Blood spurted in every direction as it impaled her and lifted her up.
“AGHHHHNNG WHAT THE FUCK!” Cobra screamed in pain as the claw took her completely by surprise. It brought her closer and closer to the hole while cobra thrashed around wildly trying to escape but the claw was to deep inside her.
She looked forward into the hole and stared in fear, as a large laraken emerged from it.

Larakens are similar to scorpions only much bigger. About 2-3 times the size of an average human being, and they have scythe like claws instead the usual pincers. There body is also covered in a hard armour that makes attacking it difficult.

“Ngghghh Shit NO!....what the fuck is that thing?!” Thought Cobra as she stared at it. She had never faced a laraken before and had no idea what to do right now. She gripped her knife and prepared to attack as she drew closer and closer when suddenly the laraken burst out of the hole and jumped to the ground below, bringing Cobra down with it as she dangled with her body impaled on its sharp claw.
“AGHHHHH” she screamed as they both fell to the ground with a “thud”.
The force of the fall managed to free Cobra and send her a few meters away from the laraken.
“I...need to....get out of here...” thought Cobra as she struggled to her feet. She spat more blood out of her mouth and held her fresh impalement wound while attempting to drag herself from the danger. But the laraken wasn’t finished with her yet. It swung its claw and slashed her back, tearing her flesh and leather suit, finally exposing her tits.
“DAGHHHH FUCK” screamed Cobra in pain as she fell to the floor again. She used her arms to drag herself across the floor in a desperate attempt to escape but was stopped as the laraken wrapped its long sharp tail around her neck.
“no....No.....NO!!!” she thought while grasping its tail around her neck. Its grip got tighter and tighter making Cobra choke and gasp for air. It then proceeded to pull her back towards itself.
“NNNNGGGG FUCK! NO AKG NO GAGH!” choked Cobra as she struggled with the laraken. It began to slowly return back to its cave, bringing Cobra along with it as she struggled to escape from its grasp.

The laraken disappeared into the dark cave and only its tail, still wrapped round Cobras neck was visible.
Cobra, still fighting against the tail was now panicing. She had to escape, but she couldn’t. The grip of its tail was to strong for her. She turned her head and looked behind her deep into the dark cave with wide eyes. The laraken then screeched loudly which frightened Cobra as she screamed at the same time in panic and fear.
“NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!” she wailed in despair as she was violently tugged and sent hurtling back into the dark cave.

Her pitiful screams of agony and fear and the larakens evil screeches echoed in the cave with sounds of bones snapping, flesh ripping, guts spilling, blood splashing and limbs tearing. Her lower half flew out of the cave and landed on the moist marshy ground. It was missing one of her legs and the muscles that made her ass were torn off and eaten by the laraken.
Cobra’s screams were now getting inhumane. They were not recognisable as she got torn to pieces but the vicious laraken.

Then....silence......

Suddenly Cobra franticly burst out from the cave screaming in agony and franticly crawling in an attempt to escape. Her body was covered in blood and her lower half was missing. Strands of intestines and guts trailed behind her as she pulled in desperation away from the cave. Her left arm was severed to her shoulder joint and 2 her index and fore finger on her other had was missing. Her tits were completely torn off and were nothing but fatty stumps on her chest. Her neck was bitten into and spurting blood, making cobra choke and cough in-between her screams.

“SOMEBODY HELP ME!” Screamed Cobra in a manic and desperate tone. He voice was high pitched and frantic.
The laraken screeched again. Cobra turned her head to the cave and saw its sharp tail shoot out of it.
“NOOOOOOOOOO! NONONO!” She screamed as it stabbed her in her chest. It picked her up and pulled her yet again into the darkness.
She used her remaining arm and grabbed onto the side of the cave just before she was completely dragged in. She pulled with all her might in her last few fingers to stop herself going back in the darkness. Then suddenly one of the larakens claws appeared and raised itself over cobras arm.
“ARGHHHHH NOOOOOO!!!!” she screamed as it then sliced downwards onto her arm, cutting it off completely at the elbow.

With noting to escape with, cobra was pulled back into the darkness once again.

Her screams of pain and agony continued throughout the night.

Fucking hot.

Is this the last part? Or is there more?

God I hope there's more....

yeah there's more, one last part with an ending epilogue.

Then I'm going to get started on my next story. The idea i got for it is awesome. I don't think anyone has thought about a story like this ever.

MY GOD that was awesome o.o

I came.....twice

bump for the last part.

working on it now. expect it by mid week ;)