When she awoke she was in darkness. At first she could not feel the pain, she was too afraid to move. When she did find the courage to move she was sickened, each of her limbs had been deliberately broken. Still she felt no pain, it was as if he nerves had been severed. But this was only a temporary blessing.
"Why?" she bleated, "Who would do such a thing to a helpless doe-eyed lop?"

Little did she know that while she was asleep, men had experimented with her, both her pleasure and pain senses had been combined through a matrix inserted into the brain.
This matrix was essentially a remote control over her nervous system allowing the owner total control of all her sensory output.
Control that was just waiting to be abused.

Suddenly, she felt a series of sharp, stabbing pains through her left side, her screams echoing deafeningly throughout the chamber. Men on the other side of the screen masturbated as she writhed in pain. The nerves in her limbs were switched on now and she could feel each fragment of bone rubbing against each other as she thrashed.
For a while, the pain stopped.
"Did you like that?" a voice boomed over the speaker.
Somehow, she managed to understand.
"You can not die. Micro-tubes in your fractures prevent the arteries from breaking. You will not lose one single drop of blood. Your heart can not stop because we control it and your brain has been stripped of it's dopamine. You are essentially immortal and will endure for years to come. We have removed your ability to squeak, but you are free to think what you will."

"Bastards!" She thought. The pain was excruciating and so intense! Even after each torture it lingered on! She must be under the effects of some kind of stimulant!
Try as it might, her brain would not cave in. Where others would become absent vegetables, she endured, for centuries, the burning, the flaying, the breaking of limbs and vivisection. All without losing a single drop of blood, all without any lessening of her consciousness. Her mind could not turn away, the men would not let her. Again and again she begged for death, again and again it was denied her. Her pain and humiliation recorded forever and freely available to anyone via the murky depths of illegal servers and Usenet.

Okay, so, I only read the first two paragraphs that it allows in the preview, and I have to say.

Excellent potential. Will read the rest later, and get back on the review.

did not fully finish it as was tried, but i agree, the potential is there

As said, the potential was there but it's very rushed (well, basically over infact!) after the preview text. You could expand on it a lot more as it just ended without going into any detail about anything...

Try again?

I like it, you're a good writer, only it's too short. Write moar.

I second the moar!

Has some interesting points, but it's sort of vague... maybe 'cause it's too short.

One could expand by detailing the tortures, reactions, etc, but otherwise I like it as a starting point for fantasy.

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Allah Akbar!

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