Ruined At Six Years Old. (Rape, Lolicon, mild Guro) (13)

1 Name: Moon Child : 2006-10-10 17:41 [Del]

Her eyes fill with tears
Fate is spelled out clearly in her fragile mind
Her wrists are bound
She's swaying to their remorseless torment
Rough hands caress her pale skin
Attempts to struggle earn her beatings
And when she screams, they take out their knives
A failed sense of humanity
Red stains white
Mark after mark
Dizzying pain
Cutting in again and again
And once she has bled enough
And her voice has gone hoarse from her shouts
They thrust themselves into her
Tearing her flesh
Destroying her virgin body
The ropes dig into her thin arms
Leaving deep marks in her tender flesh
As she is thrown from bastard to bastard
And at this point
She doesn't even bother to cry anymore
Her mind has gone numb
Once they've had their fun with her
She finds herself dumped
Out with the garbage
Her naked body violated and bruised
Her wheezing breaths heard only by the rats
And as she lies there, cold and alone with her pain
The monsters are laughing
Going home to their families
She's a thing of the past
Ruined at six years old.

~This was inspired by images of Lolicon Rape I saw on this site. It's my first of this type of poem; I hope everyone likes, or at least tolerates it. ^^;;
Thank you very much for reading! =)

~Moon Child x3

2 Name: Anonymous : 2006-10-10 19:45 [Del]

Nice first time poem. Thumbs up, hon.

3 Name: Anonymous : 2006-10-11 06:38 [Del]

oh man its good. i like it so please make more :)

4 Name: Moon Child : 2006-10-11 14:21 [Del]

Aww, thank you guys! =D

5 Name: Dave Lister : 2006-10-11 20:39 [Del]

You could've added a bit more spacing there.

6 Name: Moon Child : 2006-10-12 17:45 [Del]

>>5

Spacing? O____O;;
You mean...like between lines...?
Sorry...I don't usually do that with poems... >_>;;
It never even occured to me. ^^;;;

7 Name: Moon Child : 2006-10-12 17:46 [Del]

>>5

Spacing? O____O;;
You mean...like between lines...?
Sorry...I don't usually do that with poems... >_>;;
It never even occured to me. ^^;;;

8 Name: Moon Child : 2006-10-12 17:47 [Del]

GAH! >_<;;
I double-clicked...
I am such an idiot. ^^;;;;;
Sorry for the repeated post there. >_<;;;;

9 Name: Anonymous : 2006-10-12 23:17 [Del]

hehe, its okay. It happens. And I dont think having a gap between the lines would work... maybe from one "Scene" to the other, but thats about it. I still like it.

10 Name: Moon Child : 2006-10-13 17:48 [Del]

Aww, thank you. =)

11 Name: PB : 2006-10-16 06:46 [Del]

That was excellent, Moon Child. I liked that very much. ;x

12 Name: Little Lolita : 2006-10-28 17:38 [Del]

can you link me to this inspirational site?

13 Name: Moon Child : 2006-10-28 19:41 [Del]

>>11

Thank you! =D <33

@ Little Lolita: I meant THIS site. lol GUROchan. xDDD

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