This would be my first time doing something for gurochan in general. I have DID, and one of the people likes guro... alot. I often write gruesome stories for /b/ on 4chan, but mainly to sicken them. This time, I wanna see if I can't make it so you guys enjoy it. Feedback is appreciated, as I might do more if you want me to.
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I'd always hated the daytime.
The burning light roasted my eyes, and I tried to look down as much as possible to avoid the insane pain. Being an insomniac wasn't fun.
I cut through the park to get to the store easier. It was faster, but I had a better chance of getting into a confrontation this way; thus, I usually went around. This proved to be my mistake.
I fingered the hidden knife in my modified pocket as I approached a pair of young women, trying not to get there attention. Just as I passed, one of them flamboyantly waved her arms and shouted, to what I didn't realize at first was a the punchline of a joke.
I quickly drew the knife, slicing the artery under her bicep, blood spraying everywhere, especially on me. I drew in a few quick breaths in anxiety, hearing the other lady scream.
Suddenly, it was like looking through a window as my body began moving on it's own. The woman who had been cut fell to the ground in response to the massive drop in blood pressure, but Red wasn't about to let the other one get away. With a wild movement, he cut her face, then dropped to the ground, spinning and slicing both of her achilles tendons in one movement.
Terrified, the stared up as the body stood, glistening in blood. He licked the blood off his hands, grinning. I wasn't looking forward to watching this, but he had a way of making me watch, regardless of if I wanted to. I could hear them crying and screaming, echoing in my mind.
He quickly went to work. First, he made sure the first woman couldn't escape either, chopping a foot off in one quick movement. She screamed in agony; Yet, I still did not hear a single siren or someone approaching to help them. Apparently, the park was quite empty in the evening.
Then, he got to work. He tore off they're clothes, using them to tie up the second woman, forcing her to watch as he slit the throat of the first woman very slowly. He did it so that the blood would spray out onto her companion. Then, he unzipped the pants as she was still alive and drowning in her blood, slipping the dick into the new whole, fucking her so that his cock rammed the back of her mouth.
Her companion cried in shock and terror, screaming for him to stop. He ignored her, ripping out the first womans eye viciously, skin tearing away to reveal bloody flesh. It wasn't too much longer that he came, the woman dead a long time ago. Cum oozed from her noze and mouth as he dropped her body to the ground.
He decided next to lick the blood off the living womans body. Laughing maniacly, he began to beat her, punching her in the face, stomping on her, and breaking several bones. He made sure to cause a lot of bruising before he began to mutilate her, using the knife to slice off one of her breasts. He then one more thing, specifically to piss me off; He reached into the womans vagina with all four fingers, then tore her flesh up, revealing her innards. I remember him doing this once long ago.
I had had about enough. Just as he went to masturbate and molest this woman, I took control forcefully, and ended the womans life mercifully, stabbing her through the eye, straight into her brain. I figured that was the most painless way at that point.
I decided I probably wouldn't be eating out that night, and made my way home in the cover of the new night. A guy covered in blood wasn't all that new in the city, anyways.
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Hope you enjoyed it. I took a bit of a liberty in not getting caught by the cops, as that would have ruined the fun. Feedback is appreciated.
not very fappable :'(
Really? Ah... damn. Looks like I have to stick to messing with /b/tards then. Thanks for the input anyways.
Oh, i don't know, that's certainly not a bad start.
Yes, he fails. He failed himself for not producing not hormonal bulk in the story. It's a fool's story.
It was okay, but if it's supposed to get us off, you need more sexual parts in the story. For a simple slasher story, I give it a B-! =D
