Deadly Nightmare's- The Saw (2)

1 Name: Anime Lover : 2006-09-13 21:10 [Del]

I've written a good amount of guro fics but I've been hesitant to post them here becouse they may not have been guro enough and have fairly established characters on the site I post them. Since this is my first /lit/ post, i just want to say that i've done over 100 fic's not all are guro and I post them on renchan under the name Anime Lover.

This fic will be part of a series, but I haven't started the next chapter yet. People here seem to be nice in responding, so if my fic is liked here, I may post the others ^_^

BTW: this fic was based off of a pic i found here, of a girl bound on a board (Asuka?) and a saw cutting her up the middle.
Here's a link to the pic http://forums.renchan.org/attachment.php?attachmentid=10563&d=1142898772
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Deadly Nightmares- The Saw

By: Garrett Thomas (Gamer_for_ever19@yahoo.com AKA Anime Lover)

Disclaimer: none needed.

Warning: LOLI, GURO

In the middle of the night in a room where a seventeen year old girl sleep in her room, suddenly woke up screaming, sitting up looking scared witless. Upon realizing she had another horrible nightmare, she covered her face with her hands and cried.

“Why do I keep having these nightmare!?”

Within the last month, this girl began to have horrid nightmare nearly every other day. She soon feared sleep, but it always found her, her parents suggested writing about the nightmares to see if that helped. It did nothing but cause her to relive the nightmares, everyone which seemed to end with her dieing a horrible death.

-Random Entry-

I woke up lying on a table, I could feel my ankles and wrist bound to the table I’m on. I could also lift my head to see that I’m naked, I screamed out in fear at where I was and then noticed a large vertical saw above me.

I looked between my legs and saw that a thin line was neatly cut right up the table. I guessed what occurred on this table and I didn’t like it, I screamed for help for what seemed like forever.

Soon I saw a man enter the room I was in to my left, I screamed for help, crying.

“Please! Help me!”

As he walked closer to me I could see he was dressed in a lab coat with a mask covering his nose and mouth. He didn’t respond to my plea, so I tried again.

“Help me please! Why am I here!?”

He walked to the side of the table and replied, “You are here to be examined, your body will undergo a series of tests.”

“W-What? Why did you kidnap me!?”

We are mearly curious about the human species.”

“Human species? What are you talking about?”

“To study you physical being, we shall dived your body in two.”

“WHAT!?” I screamed. “That’ll kill me! I don’t wanna die!”

“Unfortunately, yes, the process well end your life, but we shall learn much.”

“You can’t do this to me! Let me go!”

The man didn’t reply, but I saw him move the saw that was above me, down into the grooved line in the table between my legs.

“Please! Don’t do this, I’m begging you! Please!” I pleaded crying in fear. “I don’t wanna die! Please!”

The man looked at me once before flipping the switch on the large steel saw, turning it on and slowly coming forward. At this point I begun to plead for my life even more.

“Please! I’ll do anything you want but this! ANYTHING! Please!”

The man simply stared at the saw now 1/3 of the distance away from my crotch.

“Isn’t there other tests you could do!? I’ll do anything else!”

Ignored still... the saw continued closer and I continued to plead, after seeing the saw a 3rd of the way to me, I begun to get even more desperate...

“PLEASE! I-I’ll have sex with you! I’m a virgin too! PLEASE!”

At this I finally got a look from the man...

“Maybe later...”

“What do you mean later!? Your about to have me sawed in half!” I screamed.

The saw was now inches from my crotch, my pussy wet from mild arousal to my shock. I now began struggling frantically against my bonds and accidentally moved my right inner thigh in the path of the saw whitch cut into my fleash there for a moment before I quickly returned to lying flat on the table. I saw that within just a few moments, the saw would cut into my most tender of places, and immediately I began pissing myself.

True enough, just moments later my urination was interrupted as I felt the beginning of my death and torture as the saw sliced through my clit first. I wasn’t even able to scream from just that as the saw continued forward, now slicing through my pussy and bone. I screamed for my life for this to stop...

“AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! M-Make it STOOOOOOOOOOOOOOP!”

But nothing from the man as I felt the saw continue deeper into me, the pain was unbearable. After completely cutting through my pussy and pelvic done, I felt the entire lower half of the saw now cutting through my abdomen. I did something then I regret, I lifted my head to see the saw ending my life... all the blood, and the sound of my own flesh and bone being cut was sickening.

As I screamed at this torture, I was hoping for the point in which the pain would dull, but sadly, it never came. My pain was set on 200 as I felt the saw start its work on my spine, then my soft internal organs with a wet squishing sound.

This torture was taking too ling, I just wanted to die already, get it over with. But this was not to be as I felt the saw reach the half-way point through me, the middle of my rib-cage. I once again heard the sound of thick bone being sawed through. My heart was next, it was almost over and that was the most painful yet as the blood pumping organ was cut in half.

After my ribcage was sawed in half, I had the ‘privilege’ of seeing my body lying on the table in two bloody halves. Something was wrong though, I should’ve been dead by now and I felt the saw going into my neck where I ended my screams of torture with the slicing of my voice box.

T-Then my head was next... it destroyed my lower jaw, before it finished as it sawed through my head till it hit my bran, where I immediately woke up screaming...

THIS IS NOT THE END, THERE ARE MORE TESTS TO BE DONE

2 Name: Nat-ster : 2006-09-16 09:37 [Del]

That was awsome!! Keep up the good work!

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