This fanfic based about Tales of Symphonia (My favorite game) and is set from the perspective of Shihna Fujibiashi (of whom I'm a fanboy. I use the Japanese spelling of that name because I am a tosser, no other character will be known by their jap names) This is not only my first gore fanfic but is my first fanfic of any kind. I know in the game there wasn't a chamber like the one I mention but ffs it's a ninja villiage, I'm sure they'd have one. I'll do a sequel if response is good. (note ... on the right side of the page denotes a change in perspective.)
=====----- -_- -----=====Shihna sat quietly in under the tree of mana reflecting upon Llyod's choice.
How dare he choose that... that... loli slut ahead of me.
After defeating Mithos Lloyd had taken off with Presea, the 27 year old in the twelve year old's body. My Lloyd would never betray me in such a fasion.
A faint dark aura surrounded her. A child's voice spoke out.
'That's right, you loved him and he choose another. All relationships cause are pain.'
Was it really Lloyd? No, it couldn't have been. It was that little bitch Presea's fault, she seduced him during that snowy night.
'You must must them pay for what tehy have done.'
No, no it was Presea, she is the one that must pay... Wings sprouted from Shihna's back and a cruxis crystal shard lodged in her chest began to glow
...
Presea sat humming softly in a medow, thinking how much better things were these days travelling with Lloyd. She had had her period the other day proving that once out from under the influence of the cruxis crystal she aged as normally as any.
Her humming was cut short as the sun was eclipsed by a figure that confounded the senses. In a single form there were two, a large breasted asian female and a small blonde headed boy. Before Presea could cry out one of Shihna's paper spells connected to her forhead, knocking her out instantly.
...
Shihna tied Presea down to the table using thick leather straps and released Presea from the paper spell. When she spoke her voice was as two.
'Presea, by stealing Lloyd you have sealed your doom.'
The second voice spoke. 'She must be made to pay, death is not good enough.'
Shihna nodded added straps around the bases of Presea's arms and legs, then tightened them painfully cutting off the circulation and causing Presea to cry out.
'But you are my friend, together we saved the world, why?'
'You know why you slut.' Shihna grabbed Presea by her pigtales and yanked unmercifully bringing Presea's face up to hers, straining the leather straps that held Presea down.
Presea's eyes filled with tears. 'I don't understand.'
Shihna shoved Presea's head back down onto the table and spoke as she left the room. 'You will, you will.'
...
Shihna re-entered the room after about an hour with a bag.
'Being a city with a strong history in assasination,and torture ceratinly has its advantages.'
The thing that terrified Presea the most was the delivery of this statement. Shihna had announced it in the same way you would welcome an old friend back from a long absence. Presea realised she was no longer dealing with a rational mind and quivered in terror. She strained futally against her bindings but she could barely feels her arms and legs; the leather around the bases of her limbs was cutting off all circulation.
Shihna's face took on a savage set as she sprung forward. Presea's eyes widened even further when she saw the whip that Shihna had pulled from the bag. With an almost inhuman expertise Shihna tore Presea's dress to shreds with a few short cracks. Shihan rested the whips head almost lovingly against Presea's small breasts, snaking down her nubile form.
Presea began to scream.
...
Shihna was felt a part of herself become aroused by Presea's fear and helplessness.
'Scream all you want, but screams coming from this chamber are no new thing'
Shihna admired Presea's bound form, slick with the cold sweat of fear. Her tender crotch so innocent and unsullied. 'we can't have that' Shihna spoke under her breath. Presea's screams while entertaining at first were beginning to wear thin.
'Shut up bitch' Presea's scream was cut short as Shihna gave Presea's left nipple a savage blow with the whip and it turned into a bloody mess. Presea's eyes took on a glassy look as she faded to oblivion.
...
Presea awoke to a throbbing pain that arched from her breast to her entire left side.
'You can't just faint everytime the pain gts to be too much, but don't worry, i have something for that.'
Presea was almost beyond understanding Shihna's words. Pain blossemed further in her breast as Shihna shoved a needle into the mass of flesh and blood that remained.
'This is a drug that we developed specifically for a situation like this'
Presea felt the world become clearer, and while the pain in her left side intensified mentally she became sharp. She could feel every excuciation burst of pain as Shihna pulled the syringe out.
'That will stop you fainting again. It also has the added bonus of making you more in tune with your body temporarily, meaning any sensation you feel with we multiplied. Including pain.'
...
Shihna felt herself become wet at Presea's pain. Leaning forward she kissed where Presea's nipple used to be and moaned. She pulled back a thin line of spit and blood bridged the gap between her mouth and Presea. She wiped her mouth with her hand and then licked it.
'Now I have to do something about those pure lips of your's, so tight and young before I forget'
Shihna rummaged through the bag and produced a rough wooden dildo. For an adult the dildo would have been the right size, but while Presea was an adult her body was still that of a twelve year olds.
Shihna walked again towards Presea and Presea weakly shuddered. 'Please... no...'
'Sorry I couldn't here you what was it you said.”
'Pleas-'
'LOUDER!'
'Ple-'
'I still can't HEAR YOU.'
'PLEASE' Presea finally managed to shout.
'Please? You want it that badly? Then here!'
Shihna closed the remaining distance and shoved the dildo into Presea's virgin pussy with all of her might. Presea could feel every splinter as her hairless mound tried to take in something much larger than itself. Shihna twisted the dildo and Presea felt every one of the hundreds of splinters that engoreged themselves into her flesh. Presea let out a wordless cry and a crimson flood fell from her.
Shihna slowly pulled the dildo out, savouring every pain induced twitch that the act produced. Shihna's other hand had fallen to her own pussy and she masturbated to the sight of Presea's bloody and twitching mound.
Despite even the drugs Presea could not handle the pain and even as Shihna was reaching orgasm
Presea once again found blessed darkness.
...
When Presea the lack of circulation in her arms and legs had taken its tole, she could not feel them at all.
'Some the drug must have bled straight out, so this time I'm giving you a double dose, it's not recommended for health reaasons however in this case I think that thats not a real problem.'
Presea barely noticed the small pick directionly onto her clit because of the overall pain in that region but she certainly felt the effects. She was so sensitive she could feel every grain on the blindingly painful splinters lining her inside.
'It's been over a day so I'm sure my little princess must be getting hungry, but thats ok, there is plenty of meat here just for the taking.'
Shihna pulled out a primitive hack saw and Presea watched in horror as Shihna sawed raggedly at Presea's right arm. Presea's felt strangly dissosociated from it though, she could not feel it, her arm was dead to her.
When Shihna had fully severed the limb she broke of the fingers and shoved them into Presea's mouth. Presea coughed them out and Shihna looked at her maliciously.
'Well if you wont eat it what shall we do with it??'
Shihna looked thoughfully at the limb.'I suppose we can just STORE IT FOR LATER!'
Saying this she shoved the top end of the limb into Presea's already abused pussy. The hole had already been stretched but not to this degree. Presea thrashed and strangly the thing topmost on her mind is that she would never be able to wield her axe again. Before the pain snapped her fully she thought sadly that she probally wouldn't even see sunlight again.
Presea's world became a world of pain red haze.
...
Shihna looked down of the almost prepubescent form and gasped wit pleasure. Fondling her own generous breast a line of drool was falling from her mouth. Shihna's eyes became glassy with pleasure as she reached a climax over the shreiking form of her captive. She rubbed her pussy against Presea's mouth, smearing her juices all over Presea's face.
Breathing raggedly Shihna stood back to admire her handywork. She both the leather straps that bound presea and the ones that cut the circulation off to her limbs.
'If you can get up and walk away i'll let you go'
Her only answer was a scream as the pain from the earlier amputaion finally reached Presea.
Presea couln't have moved her legs and evn if she could have escaped her broken form would have assured her death shortly anyway.
Shihna smiled, 'then you won't be needing this!' Shihna pulled out Presea's own axe and amputated Presea's other arm. 'Or these' and with a single swing cut from Presea both of her legs.
Presea was in so much pain she could barely function and when Shihna said in a commanding tone 'Now lick me' Presea did not have the mental strength to disobey.
Shihna once again rubbed her pussy against Presea's face. Before Presea could die of loss of blood and as Shihna reached her final bloody orgasm of the night, Shihna cut off Preseas head and held it to her pussy for a while longer. Shihna sighed. That was even better than anything she had ever experienced, who needed Lloyd anymore when that kind of rush was available. With a final dissapointed glance at Presea's cadevar eyes Shihna realised her fun for the night was over
'Corrine, Come and clean up.'
As Shihna left the room Corrine took his first bite of many out of the empty husk that was Presea.
...
Shihna cleaned the blood off herself in the spring and pondered that perhaps this could be a new beginning for her...
In the next chapter (If i get a good response) Corrine takes a more active role and Raine finds out that Magic can't heal everything
Awesome! This is the first story about Japanese anime, manga, or game characters, which I really feel should be the focus here, just like most of the art on GUROchan is related to it, or in that style.
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A mod already closed that thread. Please don't try to drag that discussion into other threads.
moor!!!
What is racist about it, its like saying if you like anime but not Disney and manga but not Marvel you are a racist, its just a preference for style. The majority of art on gurochan is from or about Japanese characters right? I dont mean literaly has to be Japanese people but characters from Japanese series. Its just saying you would expect everyone to start posting here their g/f/s stories about Haruhi, Rozen Maiden, Eureka 7, Hellsing, FMA, Capcom games, eroge, etc etc instead of stories that a more 'generic'...Its not about them being bad stories but the surprise that the mix of stories has so little Japanese theme and the art has so much?
Just whine about everything why dont you....
Personally, I've got both kinds of fics in the works for this board.
"Fanfic Guro" is all well and good, but it's 99% more generic than original stuff. Personally, I'm hoping to see this place filled with both kinds of fics. Fanfic Guro is great because you get characters you know. Original is great because you get fresh ideas (and fresh meat).
The one thing about the chans that I've always disliked is the limitation to Japanese art only. It's fading at a few sites (thank-fully) but it's as annoying as hell. I like diversity, not the same old same old.
"Overspecialize and you breed in weakness." - Motoko Kusanagi (GitS)
Racism is fucking stupid
This is awesome. As for the whole Jap or not thing, I don't think we really should care. Many animes( both dubbed and not ) use both english and japanese names equally. I picture all the characters as anime-style characters. Names really shouldn't be that important, just the images your mind cooks up. Also, if I can make a suggestion, why doesn't someone just add something like a drug that keeps the victim alive so they can constantly be mistreated rather than dying at the end of the story? Or perhaps another kind of.......I've said too much.
Actually, I remember reading something like that once. Only it was Nano-machines cappable of reparing almost any injury and even reviving the dead if activated in time. They beat the girl to death about 6 times, IIRC, and just brought her back.
Or you could just use the T-virus from Resident Evil....Hey, that gives me an idea!mumble,mumble,mumble
I think this thread should be saged.
KILL THIS THREAD!!! shits on the thread
Presea is 28, not 27 and you didn't explain how Sheena got a cruxis cyrstal. Other than that, I liked it.
ok soz it was a while since i'd played the game so i was pretty much guessing presea's age. The cruxis shard was mithos' and the premis is that when the cruxis crystal was shattered a shard lodged itself in Shihna. I'll probally get around to writing the next chapter but i cbf right now
btw, it's Sheena Fujibayashi, you turd
thanks for the name correction... turd -_- i feel so hurt
Fujibayashi correction I will accept and i apologise for that error (as i said it has been a while since i played) however i stand by my use of Shihna because 1 i like that name better and 2 its the way it was spelt in the jap version and in the art books.
Sheena would be shiina in japanese
SHUT UP, NYUKA!! >:O
YOU SHUT UP, YOU FUCKING SMEGHEAD! OR I'LL COME OVER TO YOUR HOUSE AND PLAY WITH YOUR INSIDES! >O
Stfu. Now. >:/ Or I'll close this thread.